loz Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 You are such a good writer, you definately have talent!!I love all your poems, I can relate to so many.Loz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelley Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 Thanks so much! x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelley Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Man! Where has my ability to write my feeling/s down In poetry gone!! *make/s It a project for today* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 hunny i love these but i have a worrie is there really this person in your life or is it metaphorical that is so opressive ?xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelley Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 Untitled Three steps forward, two steps back If im trying im manic If I give up im black Constant critisism of the things that I do Living up to your expectations But what they are, I havn't a clue You're playing with me and im sick of it all I don't do head games, you win, your call When im down you pick me up When im up you knock me down Is it any wonder I feel confused, abused This life that I have is not what I'd choose Tell me what you want me to do How should I act? I havn't a clue Tired of feeling ill all the time Nausea, headaches, emotional flu Too up, too down Never quite right Am I the problem, or is it all you? Nirvana blew his brains out with a shotgun I relate to his lyrics and you laugh at me Oblivion is safe, I won't have to feel So, so tired, and nothing is real.Wow, I wrote that back In November, seem/s I already had some insight as to what was going on!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelley Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 hunny i love these but i have a worrie is there really this person in your life or is it metaphorical that is so opressive ?xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxYes jades, there Is someone, as we all know now! There/s no flie/s on you Is there! xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted May 4, 2009 Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 im sorry to hear this shelly do u get help abou this ? it breaks my heart now knowing these poems are real feelings hugs and sharing a cry xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelley Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2009 (((((((JADES)))))))) xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelley Posted August 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Just Another Fool..... Do you know what day it is today? If things look blurred you know you've got yourself to blame Do you believe in everything they say? They'll keep you here for good Don't let them have thier way It seems the warnings weren't enough for you And now the emptiness you feel has made you dread another day I know you're not too strong Don't get me wrong 'cos I beleive in what you say And I beleive in time you'll see you lost your way Perhaps you didn't realise The tide would turn so dry your eyes for you can win You know you're just another fool Who didn't stop to think before you turned the handle of the door that shut you in Im tired of them and all they do And everything you are is only what thier twisted minds made you I know you're not too strong Don't get me wrong 'cos I believe in what you say And I believe in time you'll see you lost your way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelley Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Probably I need you every night I curse you every day I just can't win this crazy fight I guess you're here to stay I just can't give you up I just can't put you down I need the feel, the taste of you You're good to have around But I can see too much of you My senses reel, my head spins too But I don't know what else to do You give me bad dreams Bad ways Good nights and bad days Bad dreams that won't go away I see you every night Don't need you through the day You send me soaring like a kite But there's a price to pay But I can see too much of you My senses reel, my head spins too But I don't know what else to do You give me bad dreams Bad ways Good nights and bad days Bad dreams that won't go away You give me bad thoughts Bad head Things I shouldn't have said Eyes red and hair turns to grey About addiction, so was 'Just Another Fool'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelley Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 My face has fallen-off Falls to the ground Mask of stone, grim and gruff Expressionless frown There now it lies at my feet Betrayal of Facade complete The sun never moves from noon It's set in place My parched heart's a crumbling ruin Transfixed in space Here Lies This desert that I'm in The sand is absorbed by my skin I stand like a frozen stone My blood slowly rusts Strong, tall but all alone A statue covered in dust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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