walker Posted July 19, 2013 Report Share Posted July 19, 2013 written on psych ward dec 2012 after finding ourselves removed and safeguarded Leaving Home Where is that long waiting? Internal cries of deafening silence bound up with obligation of society past. Did we get it wrong? Was our pain actual or perceived by our broken mind? Do all these people really believe, or will their heads spin round in alarm and condemnation? A submerged bomb ticking by the years has welled within us, grown beyond our strength. Detonated by frenzied turmoil, our frailty has caused a storm, our words casting such deep wounds upon those who bind our life. There seems no edge to this horror. Unravelling at such speed, our mind halts in fear of running outside itself. Life, they say, is waiting. Her brightness reaching out, willing to embrace all of what we are. But we cannot touch her. We cannot bear to see her face. Her smile will burn us into dust. Our way is barred by freedom. The constraints that bound us, held us safe in fear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsune Posted July 19, 2013 Report Share Posted July 19, 2013 This is poignant, beautiful and sad all at once. xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pickle59 Posted July 20, 2013 Report Share Posted July 20, 2013 ((((walker))))..........what a journey you have made since writing this.xxxx From paralysing fear, to finding, gradually, day by day, belief of others, love, care, understanding and support.xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted July 24, 2013 Report Share Posted July 24, 2013 Our way is barred by freedom. The constraints that bound us, held us safe in fear. The whole is, as we have come to expect, a Masterpiece......intuitive, hard edged, but bathed, in your brilliant insight.......these four lines however are nothing short of BRILLIANT.......so many connotations spanning so many events and time periods........the working man's mantra, voice of the Oppressed!!. If you haven't already received Goddess status.....it's long overdue. Thank you for making (at least) one more life enriched by your Talent. Txxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted July 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2013 apollo always kind about what we write we actually entered the above and 3 others into a competition got nowhere so it seems our writing is nothing - in reality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maddy harper Posted July 25, 2013 Report Share Posted July 25, 2013 thats really good walker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 apollo always kind about what we write we actually entered the above and 3 others into a competition got nowhere so it seems our writing is nothing - in reality How wrong you are silly rabbit Can you seriously expect inferior minds to appreciate a Rembrant when there is a picture of a furry rabbit alongside it?......sadly the sheep are multiplying and watching "reality" shows in their millions.........true beauty and quality (sadly) remain the preserve of the few...........what lucky few we are, when you provide such quality for free :wub: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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