walker Posted July 31, 2013 Report Share Posted July 31, 2013 this was another that we submitted and failed in the competition please say if you think it is rubbish its about our daughter - but also our son and all children and also - about us - that we were WHOLE only when we were born Birth Life, in such glimmer. Hope, dancing. Iridescent spark of humanity opens her eyes, and trust is born. Wordless, she is already Her, in immaculate wholeness. (our heart weeps) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
artemis84 Posted July 31, 2013 Report Share Posted July 31, 2013 That is a really lovely poem walker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pickle59 Posted July 31, 2013 Report Share Posted July 31, 2013 (((Walker))) This is a beautiful poem.xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted August 3, 2013 Report Share Posted August 3, 2013 That is a true Mother's poem. Beautifully simple but evocative all the same. Walker, please be advised....we are Whole, NOT only when we are born, but when others see us "as we are" and NOT, what THEY wanted US to BE.................. Here, you are Walker, and we see you as you are.........................and you are Beautiful!! xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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