Errors In Communication

[SusieQ]

Found an old song today that I wrote over a year ago. It's nothing special, but I thought I'd post it anyway...probably because I've been reading Sylvia Plath this morning and I'm really impressed by the way that she seems to write so honestly about her experiences Obviously I don't know if she's being honest really...how can you? Anyway, I digress.

Here's the song. It's called errors in communication.

I’m trying to break through

All these errors in communication

Find the truth of what is unfolding between me and you

And yet I know I only have one view

What else can I do

When there is so much space between our meetings

And there is someone else involved

Why did I lie to you?
Why did I tell you there were other men too?

Why could I not let you know that you have stolen my heart?

I guess I feel ashamed

I know who you are and yet I do not care

And neither does she

I see it’s all over her face

When she talked about you

She thinks you are some kind of God

You are above me

I am soulless because I have not travelled

But I’ve travelled within

It sounds so crass

You wouldn’t see the journey that I’m on

And why I learnt to keep these things hidden

Kirkegaard and I, we go way back

But you wouldn’t know that

You think I’m shallow just because I fucked you

But you fucked me too

So what does that make you?

It's nice to have a bit of my history 'out there'.

[Pickle59]

(((AntarcticLeech)))........I'm really touched and moved by you sharing some of yourself and your history.xxx

[brisbane]

thanks for sharing and being real. i like how you craft words xxx