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The Bleeding Raw


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We hurting
The pain
I'm trying to stop the bleeding
Inside
From the wounds
The pain of loss
The river of blood flows rapidly
Through our veins
Pumping round the broken heart
I'm trying to hold her
dry her bloody tears
With the,sponge
It hurts me too
But I must absorb all the blood she bleeds
The bleeding raw

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I still mop them

the crimson tears

Im fine it says

No one can see

Behind her eyes

That bleed

Into a clot they form

That paralyses us

The bleeding raw

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As always I am, in amazement, and with powerful, emotions and thoughts, coming towards you...

if or when, you would like, my more full, response, please let me know, and I will post here...Thank you.

Thinking of your words...

Well wishes from moonbeambeth.

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It is more asking your permission, to give, more full responses to you, it is a powerful and truthful work of written art, I did not want to, interfere, with that..Thank you for giving me free expressive response...

Tell this woman shouts beth... (well yesterday not now!)

She knows...she sees

WHY did you not see,

me..

how tired I was

how hurt I was

to carry you,

despite

not because...

She can feel, she feels

do you now see?

That journey of pain

what I gave to

sustain

you

Thank her, call her, tell her, from me

for helping you to see me...

blood of my blood

as I pull you

back up...

This is what you have given, me, with your work, it is, a very, deep, powerful, way to assist another person...nothing I could give you back would be enough,

Well wishes, moonbeambethxxx

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Wow I'm so glad that my writings have helped you all

I thank you for sharing it with me.

I hope you can thank the one you could not see XX

Sandy xx

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Once again, my thank you is not enough to you...

Yes, I am with Beth,

(as you know I am not so separate from any of them anymore)...since we came here with, all you wonderful people, we have had so much understanding, therefore much healing...Thanks to all of you...

Beth kept feeling, was so, alone, and tired, and what she gave me, was back to myself, and her pain was, acknowledged but not, close enough, to, help her feel, my gratitude, you gave me, like a missing link...I never had, enough, of something, to feel for her, understand her, more fully...

Hope this makes sense, well wishes for you Sandy, with gratitude, moonbeambethxxx

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Yes it does make sense, im happy you have found a missing link

Emo xx

P.s

Weve re-written the poem changed a few words and added more.

Will put the link up later as im on phone which hasnt got the document on

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Hello, I wanted to say that I was thinking of you and wishing you well

I didn't know where to put this, so here it is...

well wishes, moonbeambethxxxx

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