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Assessing Me Fit For Life


moonbeam beth

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Watching you-Watch me,

all eyes, absent heart

pen to your board…

Ticking your boxes…how did I score…

See how- you see me…

All signs, tells and ticks…

Watching you watch me…

All take an’ no give…

So how’s it going, you push a false smile…

Watching you watch me…

This may take a-while…

So how you feeling…

As if you could feel…

Watching you watch me…

I know this drill…

So you know they’re not real…

You ask in that way…

Didn’t expect that,

I know how to say…

The we-ness is me-ness

It is how I survived,

The we-ness is acceptable, as long as it’s mine…

Are you just telling me what I want to hear…

No, dear assessor, myselves are too near…

In my presence, you watch…

In my presence, you take…

This presence-I own…

It is not a fact-we can fake…

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Thank you for being with me in your hard time...

I have been inspired by others here, now, most of what I write to myself is coming out like that...

It is so cool, that you called it poetry, makes me feel, complimented...

Thoughts of peace and light to you angel tears, your still aw :wub: esome to me

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Lovely moonbeam beth. So well written.

It reminded me of a story by Oliver Sacks "Rebecca". Maybe you would't relate but I leave the link for his book where the story is, in case you want to read it. I have always identified with her :-) Story number 21.

http://robinlea.com/pub/wife-hat.pdf

Hugs.

xxx

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nice one Karaindrou, I will put it on the list of links to follow...

Hope you are well within yourself, I have been thinking of you, when I look at my, 'self worth, is worth, my time', board...

Well wishes, moonbeambethxxx

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