Lily-Bee Posted April 4, 2014 Report Share Posted April 4, 2014 I would like honest opinions so don't feel you have to be nice My heart has turned pale with a terrible fright. Love me under the safe cover of night. Touch me only then under the heavy moon. Kiss me hard, your hands in my hair, make me swoon. On wet grass I surrender, open my thighs. Take me like that under the dark blue skies. Whisper sweet words of wondrous lust in my ear. Make me shiver with joy and after stay near. But before dawn I want you to walk away. Hold your tongue just hear what I have to say. My heart has turned pale with a terrible fright. My throat closes and I choke in the bright light. The sun burns everything up until its black dust. It will surely leave nothing of me so you must, love me only where my heart is safe from harm. Let the moon and stars cast their protective charm. I beg you meet me after the last bird sang his song. And have me then,do not fret my love the night is long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
morethanme Posted April 4, 2014 Report Share Posted April 4, 2014 Very good Lily xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pickle59 Posted April 4, 2014 Report Share Posted April 4, 2014 (((Lily-Bee))).............Very evocative. beautiful and telling.............Pickles.xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gandalftheginge Posted April 4, 2014 Report Share Posted April 4, 2014 Beautiful Lily, really moving Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maddy harper Posted April 8, 2014 Report Share Posted April 8, 2014 that's beautiful lily... do you often write poiems? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted June 5, 2014 Report Share Posted June 5, 2014 Lily.....and here's me thinking you were a dull Moderator!! That is a truly wonderful, dark, and evocative poem......such sensuality, such sexuality.........such obvious Vampire tendencies!! Really Lily, the first poem of your's I have read, and I would wish to read many more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carthraziel Posted June 5, 2014 Report Share Posted June 5, 2014 Beaufitul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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