Humblegrub Posted April 14, 2014 Report Share Posted April 14, 2014 And here I stand humble Trailing shadows Whispering words You'll never hear I'll find a way to step forward In this confusion I'm not alive. Lungs screaming You'll never hear. In this darkness I'm not alive Mumbling words You'll never hear Keep stepping forward Unsure insanity Twitching noises You'll never hear. Innocently yielding Self torture Just so you Will say her name She'll never hear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonbeam beth Posted April 14, 2014 Report Share Posted April 14, 2014 Thank you for sharing...it is, an unusual experience for me reading your expression, makes me feel, lost... Well wishes, moonbeambethx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BVBarmygirl Posted April 27, 2014 Report Share Posted April 27, 2014 This is a really good poem, I it. I love the way you've chosen to write it, with the repetition line of 'you'll never hear' that turns into she'll never hear. I get a great sense of loneliness that we can all relate to, that people don't hear us or don't notice...well that's what I get from it which I relate to but I'm sorry if that's wrong, but I guess an interpretation of a poem is unique to whoever is reading. It's a beautifully written poem, thank you so much for sharing! Love Rogue xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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