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Humblegrub

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And here I stand humble

Trailing shadows

Whispering words

You'll never hear

I'll find a way to step forward

In this confusion

I'm not alive.

Lungs screaming

You'll never hear.

In this darkness

I'm not alive

Mumbling words

You'll never hear

Keep stepping forward

Unsure insanity

Twitching noises

You'll never hear.

Innocently yielding

Self torture

Just so you

Will say her name

She'll never hear.

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Thank you for sharing...it is, an unusual experience for me reading your expression, makes me feel, lost...

Well wishes, moonbeambethx

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  • 2 weeks later...

This is a really good poem, I :wub: it. I love the way you've chosen to write it, with the repetition line of 'you'll never hear' that turns into she'll never hear. I get a great sense of loneliness that we can all relate to, that people don't hear us or don't notice...well that's what I get from it which I relate to but I'm sorry if that's wrong, but I guess an interpretation of a poem is unique to whoever is reading. It's a beautifully written poem, thank you so much for sharing!

Love Rogue xxx

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