Dani Posted October 6, 2012 Report Share Posted October 6, 2012 It wasn't that I didn't want you..eventhough I had a choice, It wasn't that I didn't wonder about your smile or the sound of your voice. I didn't realise I loved you until it was too late.. So. At night I close my eyes and wonder if it was fate. I didn't let myself think about a life with you included.. But now its out of my hands and the story has concluded. Stupid me..not allowing myself to feel, Shame on me for never believing that you was real. Now I have a choice..do I grieve your loss forever? Or take some comfort that one day we might be together? All I know is at night I cry..my tears run so fast down my face, falling onto my pillow then dissapearing with no trace. It wasn't that I didn't want to see your eyes.. Or wipe away your tears whenever you cried. But now there's nothing I can do but feel your loss and say.. I'm going to regret losing you so much until my dying day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 Just beautiful....no, not you, the poem ...............................you take the drama of love, and turn in into a crisis, with your incredibly intuitive insight into the human psyche.........damn, you are good!!.............. perchance to dream. Txx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted October 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 Aww thank u xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted October 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 :) Aww thanks apollo xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barebones Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 I luv it, wish i could write like that. If it was me i would give the lyrics to my hub and friend and make it into a song xx hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted October 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 Thanks I do put music to some of them too xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted October 10, 2012 Report Share Posted October 10, 2012 Thanks I do put music to some of them too xx Dear god, do your talents ever end?!! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maddy harper Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 wow, i love that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted October 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Thank u Glad u did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted October 24, 2012 Report Share Posted October 24, 2012 I'm going to regret losing you so much until my dying day. Never say never Lass.............. Men are the strangest creatures!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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