pandaprincess Posted December 12, 2005 Report Share Posted December 12, 2005 Eslaved in Silence. Indifference - a new disease: to barely feel or care, To question everything that's real. To sit a while and stare. Indulgence in a new found ruse - a subterfuge that kills, A lie that covers everything - With emptiness it fills. Unholy yearning - unholy union: Wretched carnal needs. Never learning - only using: Bitterness it feeds. Possession of a new distraction: something to be claimed, Collection of the blood and tears - From others mauled and maimed. Delusion - this is easier, than waiting to be saved, Held captive as a prisoner - In a tortured mind enslaved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barebones Posted December 12, 2005 Report Share Posted December 12, 2005 wow panda thats strong words. its really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FleeingFox Posted December 12, 2005 Report Share Posted December 12, 2005 Conjures images of an ancient one, say perhaps for literary purposes, Lestat, grown weary of the immortal hunt'!You give cause to hunger here for more of your work, with such rapidity we may grow, your command of the written word impresses, more!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaprincess Posted December 12, 2005 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2005 How'd you know I feel ANCIENT? that word has been playing on my mind since four this morning! Timeless I guess...It's strange. I feel like I've done this a thousand times before... age after age after age. I alternate between feeling profoundly awful and feeling absolutely nothing. Resolute...I made it none-personal so you could place your own character into it - whatever you see - whatever you interpret. I think that makes it better Fox: It's great when I find the right words - I think my creativity is waxing. I'll keep writing the words till it wears off :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheChangeling Posted December 12, 2005 Report Share Posted December 12, 2005 wow powerful stuff but i didnt think YOU were ancient, bet i can beat u in years at least txxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaprincess Posted December 13, 2005 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2005 :lol: heheheeeI guess I don't look ancient, but I certainly feel that way a lot of the time... and I don't exactly look 'modern'...I think I was probably born into the wrong time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
empathic connection Posted December 13, 2005 Report Share Posted December 13, 2005 heheheeeI guess I don't look ancient, but I certainly feel that way a lot of the time... and I don't exactly look 'modern'...I think I was probably born into the wrong time!<{POST_SNAPBACK}>thats how I feel, I dont look like my age by any means but I feel 20 times older than I am, is that the dx ( BULL#@&%)? ~EC~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaprincess Posted December 14, 2005 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2005 Maybe the condition turns us into tired little old people on the inside?People always guess my age wrong - and make me into a teenager The youngest I've been accused of being was 16... I was horrified! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluegrass Posted December 14, 2005 Report Share Posted December 14, 2005 interesting writing panda - beautifully creative - thanks for sharing - :wub: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lauren Posted December 14, 2005 Report Share Posted December 14, 2005 Recently I was 'accused' of being under 16.(buying ciggys)I was chuffed to bits!Guess that means im getting old :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaprincess Posted December 14, 2005 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2005 :lol: heheheeeI'd die if I was asked for ID...I wonder how much of it has to do with the condition? Maybe we're supposed look like scared teenagers... :blink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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