pidge Posted October 16, 2004 Report Share Posted October 16, 2004 i hate it when you touch me but i cant live without your touch! i hate you when your happy but i cant cope when your not! i hate the way you save me but all i want is to be saved! i hate the way you love me when it brings me so much pain! i hate the way i live my life playing different roles to please! when can i stop hating when can i feel at ease! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Betsy Posted October 16, 2004 Report Share Posted October 16, 2004 theres a lot of power in that poem. you express yourself well. bets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pidge Posted October 16, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2004 thanks betsy!!! its the only way i can! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deadwhisper Posted October 19, 2004 Report Share Posted October 19, 2004 I really like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
verbena Posted October 19, 2004 Report Share Posted October 19, 2004 I printed parts of it off to use in writing class...hope you don't mind! It is very good, sista! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pidge Posted October 23, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2004 no i dont ver!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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