wabbit Posted June 23, 2004 Report Share Posted June 23, 2004 I tell you that I am fine and I am not! I want to tell you about the horrors and the hell that I am going through, but I cant let you know, you cant see my secrets or my pain because then I will have to own it. Instead I will keep it locked up deep inside the chasms of my fortitude, and I will throw away the key. Never to reveal my true self, the one that hurts and is in pain and cries out for understanding but knows that no one understands because she doesn’t understand it herself, but she cries anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chelle Posted June 23, 2004 Report Share Posted June 23, 2004 Wabbit, That is very good. DEEP! I can really relate to that. good chatting with you earlier, hopw to do it again soon Chelle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summer Posted June 23, 2004 Report Share Posted June 23, 2004 Wabbit, This is a very deep poem. It shows your true feelings. Thanks for sharing this with us. Keep your chin up! Hugs!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight Posted July 1, 2004 Report Share Posted July 1, 2004 Wow, you express yourself very well. I really relate to what u have written. Hugs ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buoyantcat Posted July 8, 2004 Report Share Posted July 8, 2004 I really liked your piece of writing. I can relate. Thank you. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wabbit Posted July 8, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2004 I wrote that on a break at work, it took me about 3 minutes. There were no scribblings out, it flowed freely. Someone had pissed me off and I wasnt in a good mood. I felt better after writing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buoyantcat Posted July 8, 2004 Report Share Posted July 8, 2004 Cool. You must be a natural. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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