Todash Posted January 10, 2008 Report Share Posted January 10, 2008 Guilt and anger inflame the senses. Nerves on end. So much apprehension. Shunned for unrighteousness, ignored for feelings of despair. I hate this world. Let me out of here.Faces of FakenessFaces of LiesFaces of ApathyPlease let me dieYou smile and say hiThen walk on by.Sometimes you ask“How are things?”I say fineYou don’t have the timeSo you walk on byFaces of FakenessI tell you I am fineBut I am not in my right mind.I can’t tell the truthYou would not care.I hide the truth behind glazed eyes.Faces of LiesI cut myself. I bleedI cry. My heart breaks.I slowly fade to nothing.I become less and lessYou look at me then look away.I disappear.Faces of Apathy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lily-Bee Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Powerfull!! Do you want to talk about what makes you feel this way??Lilly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Life is sweet Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 That's a really powerful poem, Todash. I liked it, but it was sad too. I hope it helped to write stuff out. :hug2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Todash Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Powerfull!! Do you want to talk about what makes you feel this way??LillyThank you. I actually wrote that several years ago when my marriage and my life were falling apart. I have always struggled with being open about how I feel. I hide behind "I'm fine" and "I'm ok". But when it got to the point where it was so physically obvious I was in serious crisis, my "friends" were all of a sudden to busy, or to righteous. So I penned that in honor of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rain Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 This really got to me, I guess I can relate to it. Thank you for posting this, Todash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paris Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 wow Todash, really powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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