Shellybelly Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Jigsaw puzzledo you see me??can you tell me apart??do you know the difference??can you see who i am??do you see the small little girlshe loves to colour and be played withsing to her and read a booksay you like her and she'll love you backbe her friend and make her safeshe just a scared little girl who feels all aloneshe just want to be loved and shown that she good..do you see the angry teencan you feel her paindo you know wat they saiddo you realise shes so hurtshe is sensitive and saddont judge her to harshshe doent know how to ccopethe world is scary and bad to hercan you show her it goodmake her see that cutting and death arent the bestshow her how to loveshow her thats shes goodbe her friend and help her on her waydo you see the insecure young ladycan you see the woman underneath the shadowcan you see how much she loves and cares for youmake her see that you do tooshe doesnt know wat went wronghow to live and not be hurtshe so afraid she turn out like themand hurt a child like she wasteach this girl her opionions mattershow her not all things go badmake her see this worlds for livingand not sitting on the sidelineshelp her develop to her full potentialand be the brialliant woman she destined to be..do you see this adultdo you realise she thereshe doesnt know who she isshe cant cope with all the responsibility can she help herease the pressuremake her see she cant do everythingits not all her responsibiltyother people are there to helpshow her how to be who she needs to behelp her grow insideso she is one whole persondo you know me now...have you seen these people there all just meand im not insanedont judge me by the coveri just need to learn and be shown what i nevered learnedif you dont understand thats alrightjust be my friend and ill soon learnshow me you care and ill be thereill learn as i go and soon be just the one..im just a jig saw puzzle who need to be put together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Todash Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 OMG Mickey! That is so wonderful. I am so proud of you. I am crying right now because I am so happy for you and your insight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paris Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Mickey!!! wow!!! that really shows such insight!! i agree with todash that you should be so proud of yourself! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 yep think its all round agreement. wonderful, really proud well done.donnaxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marchmadness Posted February 15, 2008 Report Share Posted February 15, 2008 Mickey -OMG that really is very good, glad to see you are able to put yourthoughts down. Good for youMarch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feistymiss Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 just lovely mickey congratulations, loved the title too ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shellybelly Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Im anger and hurt so thought i write more poems but dont wanna make loads of new post so puttin more in here with this onethis poem is about my sister who died at 4 days old before i was ever born but still made a mark on my life..probaly for all the wrong reasons and not by any fault of her own..i was always compared to her and told if she had lived i wouldnt be here so i think my anger come from thatfor the angel i never knew..do you know what you have done?do you see the pain you've cause?can you see wat ive become?i know that you had no choicein this life but with your death came my lifethey loved youand was i was no goodsecond place i alway camenext to youim not worth the timethey chose not to love me but youyou left me..where are you now? can you see the tears i cry?do you see the pain you've caused?i lie here and cryof a sister i never knewand dream of of the way things could of beenyour suppose to have been here to protect mewhere were you when i criedwere you there watchin as i told a lieare you watchin over mecan you see what i have donedo you see the mark i bearare you proud of who i have becomecan i come and stay with youwill you end my miserywill you take this pain from meremove the burdens that i bearwill you sit on my shoulderand show me the wayim lost and im sad be my big sisterand take me by the handguide me throughmy pain and sadnessand help me be who i can beremove my fear and show me strenghttake my sadness and replace with joyim shattered from withinhelp to fix me uplove me like a sister shouldand be my angel who i loveshow them the way to healand make them see that im just meyou were not meant to bemake them love me for meand be proud of who i amMake me see it not your faulti had the life i felt was meant for theeDADi loved you when you you wished me deadi loved when you made me cryi loved you when you were sicki loved you were drunki love you when you hurt mumi loved when you made my brother leavei love you with all my hearti love you no matter wati was you baby girl i wanted to be my daddys girlnow i hate you and cant stand this pain anymoreid love you more if you were dead.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feistymiss Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 excellent mickey, they are worthy of being published they areexcellent !!!!!!though i also do hear your pain, and hurt, and that you are grieving for your lossxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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