fairytales817 Posted July 6, 2004 Report Share Posted July 6, 2004 Spinning thought eternity As the spirits summon me To watch the world through angel eyes Instead of through fogged glass With inconstant time being tossed And thrown about by the wind To these angels I send Reminders of distrust For though the wind cools my face My blood runs hot With the wild emotions Surging though my veins I am alone with cloudy skies These unfaithful angel eyes See not as I do But stare at me With piercing, cold love The wind ceases To leave me stranded, still alone But this is irrelevant Because I am not real My melody ceased in my dreams The wind is my breath That time misplaced Don't laugh at me please. I've never been that good at writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight Posted July 7, 2004 Report Share Posted July 7, 2004 I don't think anyone would laugh at this. I think its really good and shows u can express how u are feeling really well through words. Keep them coming! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairytales817 Posted July 14, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2004 I wish people would post their interpretations of this poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buoyantcat Posted July 14, 2004 Report Share Posted July 14, 2004 Ahh...like I did in American Literature... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
befuddled Posted July 14, 2004 Report Share Posted July 14, 2004 This is a really, really good poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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