Rael Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 All in all your past is due.The future laid to waste in this empty,This open festering creation.Oh how I wish I could cry,Blood tears all I have left.No more,No more of this insanity.Blessed relief,Worshipped oblivion.I will fall to my knees in the blacknessthat engulfs my soulif only it consumed.My last hopemy no hope,My sanctity,My teeth grind through the chancesDevoured andGone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pgiggle Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 your poems are fantastic Rael.i love your turn of phrase, pls keep sharing hun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharcoalKiss Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 Wow Rael. Another beautiful poem.P's right, pls keep sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shellybelly Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 class poem hunand hey hope you keepin ok i havent heard from you in a bitguess both us missing each other round here latelybut hope you keeping your side of pact as im keeping minehey were both still here so were doing greatand keep using your poetry to express your thoughts and feelinghugs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eman Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Wow!Rael, that is really evocative. Keep writing, this is a very powerful home.E XXXXXAll in all your past is due.The future laid to waste in this empty,This open festering creation.Oh how I wish I could cry,Blood tears all I have left.No more,No more of this insanity.Blessed relief,Worshipped oblivion.I will fall to my knees in the blacknessthat engulfs my soulif only it consumed.My last hopemy no hope,My sanctity,My teeth grind through the chancesDevoured andGone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eman Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Wow!Rael, that is really evocative. Keep writing, this is a very powerful poem.E XXXXXAll in all your past is due.The future laid to waste in this empty,This open festering creation.Oh how I wish I could cry,Blood tears all I have left.No more,No more of this insanity.Blessed relief,Worshipped oblivion.I will fall to my knees in the blacknessthat engulfs my soulif only it consumed.My last hopemy no hope,My sanctity,My teeth grind through the chancesDevoured andGone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primal Scream Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Donna, your poem is beautifulPrimal x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted March 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 thankyou all, that one in particular meant a lot to me as it is my feelings over this past week. it was very hard for me to write that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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