Phoenix Rising

[Rael]

When angels cry

With blood on their wings

The devil he laughs

And the demons they sing

When beauty is parted

And the image is scarred

Lost faith from the preacher

Who's visions are marred

From out of the garden

Where no flowers grow

Was entered a secret

For no one to know

For no one to speak of

And no one to touch

For those that would seek it

It would be too much

When heaven's departed

Decayed in disgust

When the garden is empty

And crumbled to dust

Shall rise from the ashes

And spread its great wings

A phoenix, pure golden

For our future it sings

From out of the garden

Where no flowers grow

Was entered a secret

For no one to know

For no one to speak of

And no one to touch

For those that would seek it

It would be too much

As the light is fading

And it lays its head to rest

A vain of hope arises

And settles to the west

As time comes to an end now

A new dawn has arrived

Everything forgiven

Just glad that we survived

[Life is sweet]

Rael,

Well written. I think that is very cool you are able to create stuff like that and write like that. Kudos to you. Well done.

M.

[beebizme]

Rael,

Thank you so much was missing your writting! That was outstanding. Please take good care of yourself , and I lookforward to seeing more.

Steady on girl!

Beeb

[tripper]

Rael this is exactly why I am having a phoenix tattooed on my lower leg! Beautifully written it encompasses everything I need to explain why I am drawn also the phoenix. Do you mind if I print a copy out and keep it?

[Ulrica]

Beautifully written. I always look forward to reading your new poem posts. They move me in the core. Even though the subject matters are often dark they give me goosebumps. You are so talented girl. Keep it up.

(I'm sorry I haven't been more supportive when you've been feeling upset latley. I am (and have been) thinking of you and sending happy thoughts.)

:hug2:

[Rael]

thank you for your comments and people have been more supportive than they realize, just by being there and providing me with the knowledge that you are there for me should i be able to find the words to express myself.

and becc i am honored that you would want to print a copy off and of course you may. thank you. this was my first song/poem with a pretty happy ending so was really wary about it and am so pleased that it has received such a warm response.

all the best

donna

xxx