BelieveInMe Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 The Life of a BorderlineIn this borderline mind of mine,living is Hell, death sublime,leave me,hate me,push me away,no wait,there are things that I cannot say,fearful that you, not unlike all the rest, will not stay,cutting deep into my flesh,helping to get me through the day,defenses run high,and impulse control is weak,struggling to stand on my own two feet,too often the pain brings about defeat,sending the darkness back into the light,emotions become stoic,depression delights,walls are built high,help me,rescue me,hold me tight,its all too much and I need to hide,I must retreat out of sight,black and white thought,no grey inbetween,thinking too much,battling my dreams,I want to die,no let me live so that I may fight,here we go again with all the pills,shrinks,hospitals,and therapists too,they all know how to help me through,you'll stay away if you know whats good for you,rejection,terror,pain,and fear,resounding in the voices of the unfallen tears,this is my world,my safety lies here.BelieveInMe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormlover2007 Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing your poem with me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pynn Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 Wow. Have you been reading my mind? Very powerful...Thank you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shellybelly Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 thats brilliant i love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickyP Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 very good. x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scrambled1 Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 Very good, thanks for sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rain Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 I can relate to that so much. Might even use it as an example sometime to show others what I experience things like, if you don't mind that is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crimsonblade85 Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 i can relate to it... nice poem~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BelieveInMe Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 Thank you all so very much for the wonderful words of support-- it means so much to me right now! BelieveInMe :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BelieveInMe Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 I can relate to that so much. Might even use it as an example sometime to show others what I experience things like, if you don't mind that is?Thank you very much! I have no problem with you using if you want. BelieveInMe B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vickyw Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 really good poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jonny inter Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 The Life of a BorderlineIn this borderline mind of mine,living is Hell, death sublime,leave me,hate me,push me away,no wait,there are things that I cannot say,fearful that you, not unlike all the rest, will not stay,cutting deep into my flesh,helping to get me through the day,defenses run high,and impulse control is weak,struggling to stand on my own two feet,too often the pain brings about defeat,sending the darkness back into the light,emotions become stoic,depression delights,walls are built high,help me,rescue me,hold me tight,its all too much and I need to hide,I must retreat out of sight,black and white thought,no grey inbetween,thinking too much,battling my dreams,I want to die,no let me live so that I may fight,here we go again with all the pills,shrinks,hospitals,and therapists too,they all know how to help me through,you'll stay away if you know whats good for you,rejection,terror,pain,and fear,resounding in the voices of the unfallen tears,this is my world,my safety lies here.BelieveInMe your excellent poem is thought provoking, and helps to put life in perspective. thanks for sharing it, i must confess i cried when i read it xxx jonny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rew Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 this is fantastic!Very well put, i can relate to every wordxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiellover Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Thank you for sharing. I can completely relate..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BelieveInMe Posted June 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Thank you all so much-- it means a lot to me to know I am not alone.BelieveInMe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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