Rael Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 The hammer falls with silent blowsThe world is lost in shadowsDisconnected and left aloneDevoid of sight, time has me blind(ch)In our faith resides the keynot in buildings of beliefsIn our hearts, and one dayour pride will comeAnd in our strength it's in our handsWe traveled far 'cross distant landsuntil we reacheduntil we found our wayI ran forever to get youI ran through rain and thunderAnd from intentions once clear and purecome twisted sights, cast from my mind(ch)And with the end comes blind reliefWe stand within Their wisdomTired and broken but not aloneI know this time, I've found my peace(ch) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daisy duck Posted January 13, 2009 Report Share Posted January 13, 2009 I really like your song...you are a talened writerxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted January 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 thank you is gonna make a lot more sense rhythm-wise once i got the music donexxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Rock on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 u rock xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramfan007 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 I like the lyrics, will you post the finished article when youve done the music, id like to hear it.HugsRamxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted January 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 ty and yes i will be posting stuff when i finally get round to doing them just either seems to be the last thing on my to do list or when i can i just cant motivate myself. am getting arse in gear though xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amy123 Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 i loved it.Amy xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AveMaria Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Wonderful lyrics! Do you have an idea about what the music will be like yet? (I am not at all musically inclined, so I hope my question made sense) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 thank you it will be EBM type music, random mix between dance/trance/electronic/goth/industrial. my fave bands in this genre are VNV Nation, Assemblage 23, Covenant, Icon Of Coil, Suicide Commando, Project Pitchfork ack theres tonnes all i ever do is listen to musicxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timmy Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 This would be good to hear with the music.I like the lyrics.Very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catspiracy Posted February 2, 2009 Report Share Posted February 2, 2009 Oh, your lyrics are profound and gave me chills! especially "And from intentions once clear and purecome twisted sights, cast from my mind"You have cool taste in music, I love VNV Nation! It's funny, I kind of heard their sound as I read your lyrics, and then you mentioned them. Super cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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