x.glitter_raindrops.x Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 (edit: Ive retitled it unconsious)(edit: this is probably a work in progress so ther will probably be more bits added[i dont really know the whole meaning behindim not really here right nowmy minds dead and distantonly words in sequence for me at the moand seeing things]non the less......here goes:Fadinglike silent sunriseim still herebut this dark, my temporary demisetarnished,like old brass,running out of life,like the sun deprived grassthe world still turning,I'm here, but you cant see,invisible,to your world,i cease to be.Safe from youbut not from my own,parallel universe,and to you it cant ever be shown(edit: more to add)You cant be here with me,only in my mind,although u are sat beside,my senses are blindyour every word echoes,your touch is a tiny tingle:unconscious, with eyes wide open Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daisy duck Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 I love your poem even though its oviously so painful for you.Writing poetry helps me deal with my emotions,hope it helped you writing it.xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 i can feel your pain unfortunatly im off to bed do hope youllbe ok pm me if you want ill pick it up snd snser in the morning k hugs xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daisy duck Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 hope your okay,we care about you.xxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 morning u ok its jades Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 hope u ok broken, wanna talk? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x.glitter_raindrops.x Posted January 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 9am and Im actually up and awake (well in my pjs wrapped in my duvet but, still)so yeah i guess im okreally want a ciggybut told my mum i was giving up....damn i need the stress like a judge needs a liarlolx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 good to har you laugh your sounding better ill smoke one for ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x.glitter_raindrops.x Posted January 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 good to har you laugh your sounding better ill smoke one for yameanylolone wont hurt...right??cleaning spree today and all thatyou ok?xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 yeah a biit sore and shaky had a hangover but over it now mom and dad left town i really am so happy to hear you so clear today does my heart goodxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 really like the poem hope you feeling betterxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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