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So i believed when you said i was special,that i had all of your heart,

if that was so true...then why are we apart.

I never could get mad at you but now i am madder than i thought i could be,

If you felt that way about me then why choose her over me?

I wanted us together...i wanted a happy ending,

Now im beginning to think you were only pretending.

I don't play games ..i like to know where i stand,

for once in my life i felt you did understand.

Everytime you kissed me did you then go and kiss her too?

Everytime that you touched me are they where you touched her or she touched you?

I blocked it out of my mind but now i see it clear..

you had the best of both worlds as long as i was here.

Were you pretending that is was me that you loved all along,

Now when i imagine us together it feels so wrong.

You have chipped away at the part of me that wanted you to be mine..

i knew there was a limit and we've ran out of time.

I just wanted me and you ..the fairytale ending..

but now its all over..im convinced you were pretending.

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That was beautiful and summed up the horrible feelings you get when someone you love betrays you. Even reading it gave me chills and made me feel like I was going to throw up as I remembered past events in my life that would fit your poem. Lol that sounded really depressing, but I meant that it made me really feel the feelings in your poem, so its obviously amazingly well written!

And like Rael said, you deserve someone who really does love you for you and accepts you just as you are!

xxx

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I want to say something all mushy and supportive but all that's going through my head is "what a bastard"! How dare he do that to you. Cheeky sod. Grrr...... don't make me angry, you won't like me when I'm angry.....

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That was beautiful and summed up the horrible feelings you get when someone you love betrays you. Even reading it gave me chills and made me feel like I was going to throw up as I remembered past events in my life that would fit your poem. Lol that sounded really depressing, but I meant that it made me really feel the feelings in your poem, so its obviously amazingly well written!

And like Rael said, you deserve someone who really does love you for you and accepts you just as you are!

xxx

thanks...sorry for nearly making you sick!lol

xxx

just read your poem...its really good

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I want to say something all mushy and supportive but all that's going through my head is "what a bastard"! How dare he do that to you. Cheeky sod. Grrr...... don't make me angry, you won't like me when I'm angry.....

Aw thanks roses...im angry too!!!I was a fool though also so my fault too

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Sounds like you have some closure there If I am reading this right. Roses is right he is a fool for letting you go.

You are meant for somebody better.

Take care,

B.

thanks boy blue.....hope you are well also

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