Lance Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Just something I threw together just now. Wrote it in a way that we can all relate to.This is for all those people that either don't take you seriously, don't believe you or generally get right up your nose!Stand in my shoes, live a day of my life,and see for yourself just what makes me cry.Feel what I feel and dream what I dream,then try and tell me I have no right to scream.You taunt me, mock me and belittle my word,but see through my eyes how I just don't care,'cos you're not in my shoes, you stand in your own.So keep your mouth shut and leave me the fuck alone....and stuff.Peace, Lance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crocus Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 My favorite bit is the ....and stuff!Love it though, so true....fuck em all right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 My favorite bit is the ....and stuff!Love it though, so true....fuck em all right?Hehe, cheers Sweet D. Yeah, screw 'em all...well those that deserve to be told that anyway.Peace, Lance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
canadian mike Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Great, Lance, just great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AveMaria Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 I agree with Sweet D and Mike... I can definitely relate, its a great poem!xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 That is a great poem Lance. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tray Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 gona write that down and look at it evertime i go down my parents :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 gona write that down and look at it evertime i go down my parents Hahaaa...I feel you on that. Same here with my dad, he's who I had in mind when writing it >_<Peace, Lance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Really good poem...think i'll copy it and keep it for future reference if thats okay! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowman Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Thank you for writing that.....describes everything right now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Thanks peoples, glad you like it. I know it's very standard poetry and ryhmes but it gets the point accross, which we all seem to share, heh.Peace, Lance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted March 23, 2009 Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 can definitely relate to that, ive said many things like that out loud and in my head to people before (although not nearly so poetically)xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramfan007 Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Really really like that Lance, just how I feel some daysRam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quiteemma Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 great poem x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paris Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 fab lance i really can relate to this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slimspider Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 lance is a poet and he doen't know it !!!good one mate!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Posted April 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Thanks a lot peoples Peace, Lance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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