Dani Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 'i don't wish to speak or even hear your name,this isn't a conversation and i'm playing no game.I cannot forgive you for the damage to my heart,you took me for a fool and tore my life apart.The credits are rolling ..it's the end of this show,what you don't realise is i moved on long ago.You continue to try to talk to me,to remind me of what we had,regardless of it's implications and the way it makes me sad.You see you were never the type of man i wanted even as a friend,i was just so vunrable and you took advantage untill the end.Don't talk,don't walk in my path from today,don't look at me...or accidently touch me that way.You see i'm stronger than you ever thought i could be...i have finally realised you were never good enough for me.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Wow Dani! This is so powerful. It starts off angry then turns into how you feel and then ends with a totally awesome statement. "you were never good enough for me". You rock!!! xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tinkerbelle Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 very powerful indeed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Wow Dani! This is so powerful. It starts off angry then turns into how you feel and then ends with a totally awesome statement. "you were never good enough for me". You rock!!! xxxthanks roses! i guess i am in a reflective/poetic mood tonight.xxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 very powerful indeed.thankyou....i find writing poetry helps me get out my thoughts and emotions...have you tried this?I read and replied to your other post.Would writing things down help?xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiralling Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Great poem! B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
successful_workthru Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 great poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 like it a lot and so positive and strong at the endxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 thanks guys....xxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boy_Blue Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Fantastic as always Dani. You have a real talent for writing x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Fantastic as always Dani. You have a real talent for writing xthanks BB....good to hear from you...how you doing?xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boy_Blue Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Not too bad Dani thanks x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramfan007 Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 I really like this Dani, its very powerfulRam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 I really like this Dani, its very powerfulRamthanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FuzzyLogic Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Excellent read, well done :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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