Sammy Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Sometimes I close my eyesto take away the painI imagine a new worldthat is beautiful and goodI see flowers more radiantand grass as green can beand trees that tower over usand reach up to the skyI see animals big and smallthat bound across the landand everyone is smilingand holding each others handI hear laughter and joyand love in every voiceI hear the wind that whisperspeace forever more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 A dream of utopia is a lovely dream to have. This poem is beautifully worded. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Data Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 very nice poem, thanks Sammy I think perhaps when I am sad, sometimes instead of dwelling on it I should close my eyes for a bit and imagine a world like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rael Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 i have read all of the poems and they are really good. i like this one because it reminded me of the place i go to when i need comfort (its usually involving me being at a music gig or meeting bands) but it really can keep me going when i need it, we all need an escape into our perfect world.xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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