A Demon Stration Maybe

[Rael]

really cant stress enough that this may trigger. i have deliberated on where to post this and even whether to at all but in the end it is a poem/song i wrote and creativity is important to me. i know its not great, def not as good as i know i could have done but it served a purpose, it was written as a way of helping me with something and keeping me from acting. it is violent and swearing too, i have changed one swear word although personally the original was more powerful to me but i know it does offend many people (funny how i changed that yet the content itself is so extreme). and the title is not a misspelling, the gap in the word is deliberate. just another warning, if you would find anything graphic and about a serial killer offensive then dont read. btw the chorus is meant to be different, a progression, and the difference in attitudes between the verses and chorus are the different voices, masks. the difference between seeing it as 'art' and then the sadist and even perceived victim that lies beneath.

Finally my dark side sees the light

are you held tight?

I wouldn't want for you to miss this show

It's art you know

A demonstration maybe, just a taste

but it would be a waste

a tragedy if you were not to see

the best of me

(ch)

You fucking little bitch you're going to die

I'm gonna cut off all your limbs and eat your eyes

You epitomize everything I despise

There'll be a thousand cuts for each and every lie

This is going to hurt more than you know

but that's the show

I'll enjoy every second of it

It's only fit

Of course it's nothing personal really

it's just that yearly

I clear all of the shit out of my life

This year was rife

(ch)

I'm going to slit you, hear you scream, watch you bleed

If I'd left you legs now you'd be on your knees

I'll tear off all your skin and make you see

that the only one who cared this much is me

Soon you're going to beg for me to kill you

but in truth

I'm having too much fun to let it end

Are you not too my friend?

Do you even know, did you ever see

what you did to me?

You know, I lied, it's fucking personal

I'll put you through hell

(ch)

I'll carve you up, drive you insane

You'll see your flesh go down the drain

When nothing i could do to you remains

I'll put a bullet through what's left of your fucking brain

(refrain)

The end it comes to everything my dear

Forgotten, the remains that I leave here

Trust me I'll continue when you're gone

Trash like you, there'll always be another one.

[Data]

Very good Rael. I can see the rage within you and admire you for finding a creative outlet for it .

[canadian mike]

Wow! Powerful, Rael! Thanks for sharing!

[Ocean Wolf]

Thank you for sharing that, Rael.

[successful_workthru]

thanks for that

Art can be offensive, as it depicts emotions, both light and dark.

The artist, of course, dosen't mean to offend, and they should be commended for expressing their darkness though creativity.

[roxy222]

i like it alot, a real lot, and im a v v harsh critic of any written word, so well donex

[Dani]

very powerful Rael..thanks for sharing

xx

[Rael]

thank you guys, it means a lot, writing is about the only safe outlet i have and it always feels good when others like it too

xxx

[CharcoalKiss]

Rael,

I can't read this in depth atm. Although i have glanced over it and just wanted to say that it sounds very well written - as always - and powerfully emotive. I will read it properly at some point.

Keep writing! :)