WishfulMoonAngel Posted July 16, 2004 Report Share Posted July 16, 2004 don't know if anyone's interested in them...but I've got several poems...I just scribbled some in this blank book I had in my room...rambled on for a while...most probably won't make any sense...but whatever...here are some of them... A Best Friend's Love How I feel you deny. Tell me why would I lie? Nothing's real, nothing's right. All I can do is wait for night. I need to see the moon above, so I can feel my best friend's love. The pain that swims inside my head, making me feel like I am dead. But your call makes me feel so glad, nothing you say or do could make me sad. "My best friend forever", that's what you told me. And now I see, the light inside you, inside me. Thank you, for bringing the light back. Thank you, for putting me on track. Thank you, for always being there. Thank you, for showing you care. Fragments all these pieces on the ground like these thoughts spinnin round they're all fragments of my mind making everything hard to find truth be told, I've lost my way I just can't find the light of day I know well, this pain inside but I just want it to be a lie but it's there, my truth, my fate how do I live with all this hate the fights, the tears, all the fear I just wish so hard not to be here now I fall down, back to my hole of dark my only choice left, to bury my heart I can fight, I can scream but it's all more than it seems the end is near, good or bad I hope to justify why I'm sad I will stand up again, I feel if not, I pray this all unreal I'm alone standing here, take my hand please guide me through my last stand fall or stand, it's not my choice it is like I have lost my voice the night will come, soon I pray I grow weary of this painful day the moon will come, I'll be free because only then can I be me there's two...I just realized some aren't even on my comp...must have deleted them...I don't know...whatever... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fairytales817 Posted July 16, 2004 Report Share Posted July 16, 2004 I think these are REALLY good poems. They do too make sense! Don't get down on your own work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buoyantcat Posted July 19, 2004 Report Share Posted July 19, 2004 Wow...I really really liked "A Best Friend's Love". That was cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WishfulMoonAngel Posted July 19, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2004 I'm glad people like them....I have a few more to add now...had to go searching through my little notebooks and papers that are scattered all round my room... ...why's my room always a mess?...I clean it constantly....and never spend any time in it...oh well....anyways...whatever...here's some more poems... Colors Blood like fire. Tears like rain. Eyes of ice. Body of stone. The black of my soul. The white of my lies. Green in my closet. Brown in my hair. Silvery moonlight. Golden daylight. The colors inside give me a wall. The rainbow hides me from all. Take this darkness and this fear. Tell me exactly what I want to hear. Please Take the years, and the fears. Take the pain, and the rain. Take the light, and the night. Take them all, take this wall. Leave the track, take me back. From the dark, to your heart. From all that alarms, straight to your arms. Stay with me, be with me. I am lonely, but I am me. Oh Beautiful Stars the world comes tumbling down all round me... hurts so bad.... but they were there... my friends...they came to me... stayed with me...all around... though I have never seen them with my eyes..... they mean the world to me... I guess in a way... they are my world... truth is...they needn't be here because they know just what to say to make it all ok... no...none of this rhymes... there's no rhythem... for the world isn't defined by that... there's no give or take... no balance.... it's all a great pain... suffering of many... but........... there's friendship....and that surpasses all things....even hatred...even pain....even sorrow... I never believed....I do now...my friends...are the angels that heaven sends....they come from the stars....the moonlight their guide... look to the sky...oh look!... they're so bright...so beautiful.... I love them...all of them... stay with me, oh brilient stars.... for the daylight is unkind to me...brings the pain back....brings the hatred....and sorrow... but the night....I am me...and that's all that matters...oh beautiful stars... geez....I know there was another...I swear....anyways...hope to hear what you all think of these... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buoyantcat Posted July 19, 2004 Report Share Posted July 19, 2004 I like "Please"......that and the best friend one. I would like to copy and paste them into my AIM profile, so my friends could see them.....because they sum up how I feel.....but I don't want to steal them from you. Maybe I should just get off my lazy bum and write my own damn poetry. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight Posted July 24, 2004 Report Share Posted July 24, 2004 I think these poems are really good....I wish I could write like that! It must be a good way of getting down how u feel. I really like 'Oh Beautiful Stars'...something magic about that one. Twi xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WishfulMoonAngel Posted July 25, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2004 I'm so glad people like them...but a little surprised cause I really thought they sucked ....well...anyways... buoyantcat : of course you can use it...put it in your profile or what not...I don't mind...I mean...it's not like you're gonna publish it somewhere or something without me knowing... ................you better not.......anyways...LOL... ....it's cool twilight : it does let me write how I feel...but I have to destroy them...or put them somewhere I won't look in...I put my most depressing thoughts down more so than anything else...so if I reread them it upsets me all over again... ...it's sad that I can't even read my own work sometimes... thanks for the replies...love you all....so nice...I'll post some more whenever I write another few... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
budgie Posted July 25, 2004 Report Share Posted July 25, 2004 Gee Wishmoon angel, your poems are fantastic. I wish i m a publisher (shit I hv no $$$!). But trust me. I do like them LOTS. Simple, truthful, right on spot. I like that. Life is easier that way I always say. Good work Moon. Keep it up. Budgie B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight Posted July 25, 2004 Report Share Posted July 25, 2004 Ahh yeah, I hadn't thought of that, that re reading them can be upsetting. But I guess even if u write it all down and then destroy it (but post them on here first ok !!), u can maybe get a bit of relief. And now u know they're good, u can be proud that u are producing something that is good.....I don't think that makes sense, sorry! Take care, Twi xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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