Rainbow Tears Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 I am an island A woman stands alone in a dusty room Whispered memory blankets with a scent that only she can see The visions burn Her mind expanding to the horror The nightmare Reliving every moment Tainting empty air She cannot comprehend how others can exist Uncrippled by their past Unbound by hollow logic The rules were carved by snipe and snarl Driven through her skin to seer within the putrid depths A scar which cannot be undone The wound will never heal The child is broken Scrambling in the ashes for the world that she once knew Or never knew, Imagination fleating fancies of a time when she is happy Bundled joy in cotton gloves Sits giggling in an padded ocean Transformed by twist of fate Hollow eyes gaze from pale white skin Their emptiness translucent A ghost at 7, already gnarled by time She is alone now No soul can help her but her own Her mind must build a border Distance itself from the world it craves too much But can never have Others in the metal shells May glance of bullets with not thought nor motion Move through life as solid stone But never will they feel The raw emotion Ignited By summer breeze Or moonbeams subtle chill Distant vapours snake through unclosed mind Spark bonfires in the dust Their embers burn forever more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 wow rainbow.very decriptive. such a beautiful yet sad poem xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanctuary Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Really good rainbow xxx You must write more! xxxx ((((((((((((rainbow))))))))))))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ubix Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 Fantastic, YOU have a real talent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 This is amazing. I especiailly like the moonbeam line, so true! Great work hun xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 very well done hun. i really like how you evoked emotion and the senses xxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlylight1 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 i'm going to read it later rainbow. can't concentrate much now. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Tears Posted March 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 thanks for the replies ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarabpd Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Oh rainy that made me cry . You are amazing and your poem is beautiful to reach such emotion. I am saddened by it , to think that is in your heart. But you are not alone and you have so much to achieve. Raise your head up high because you are amazing and oh so strong. Ty for sharing xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lauraw2693 Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Like everyone else has said rainbow, I think this is amazing - you should definitely write more! Can relate a lot to some of the emotions conveyed here, really hope you're okay, many hugs xxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordsmithy Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Beautiful, it's really really piled with imagery. Almost overwhelming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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