Dani Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 'Constant rejection and hurtful words... said to me time again like i never heard. well i hear your words quite clearly and i fully understand... youve fallen through my fingers like tiny grains of sand. but still i care...still i carry on... still i love you...still i think you're the one. Reading your words just sadden my heart... so i try to get on ...but i end up right at the start. i travel in circles..circles around you... carrying weight on my shoulders...so sad but true. So why do i care?when i know how things will be? why fall in love with someone who cannot stand me? i don't have the answers ...so i will not ask myself why... i care so much yet my blood still runs dry.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brokenbutterfly Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 i feel your words (()) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 thank you.though i hope you havent experienced the same.x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dopey Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Dani - Rejection, hurt, love very intense words. Well written. Dopey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 thanks dopey... i find writing it helps xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarabpd Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 very good . Very sad . Hope it helped x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 arent all y poems bloody sad? it has helped a little thanks xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanctuary Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 So true and poignant... better days ahead, we WILL beat our emotions one day... never give up! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 circles constantly but we will get there :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowman Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 I like the poem, Dani. I hate the going in circles experience though.......why is nothing ever simple? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 i just dont know...its just life isnt it? xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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