scarlett fauve Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 If If tears could rebuild trust and untruths ease my pain, i wouldnt be in his bed tonight but in your loving arms again. If pride could just be swallowed and humble pie could just be ate, my life would be eternally yours, id cross no other mans gate. If forgotten memories could resurface from a forgotten winter long ago, you'd see who realy cares for you, id be your love and not your foe. If my heart could turn back time and my soul say things unsaid. If you will only let me show you i can bring back the feelings you say are dead. By Me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emmie18 Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 Aww hun.... That really is amazing. Well done love it! Take care Emmie xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanctuary Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 That really is amazing... beautiful writing too xxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 love this x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarlett fauve Posted April 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 Thanks guys, this is the first time anybody has seen this (apart from my grandfather before he died.) Was 15 years old when i wrote it but just found it this morning and thought id post it x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElleB Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 This is gorgeous. I write poetry too and found myself lost in that =) Glad you posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milky24 Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 thats really good i used to write in my teens , i must find that book, some dark days are in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pink stars Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 Beautifully written x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarlett fauve Posted April 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 thats really good i used to write in my teens , i must find that book, some dark days are in there. I think it would be good if people started posting their poetry on here x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarlett fauve Posted April 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 Aww hun.... That really is amazing. Well done love it! Take care Emmie xxx Thanks emmie x :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarlett fauve Posted April 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 That really is amazing... beautiful writing too xxxxxxxx Thanks sanctuary. It means alot to me that people like it x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarlett fauve Posted April 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 Beautifully written x Thanks pink stars x :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarlett fauve Posted April 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 This is gorgeous. I write poetry too and found myself lost in that =) Glad you posted! Thanks elle x Think writing poetry has always helped me so much with my depression and coming to terms with certain events, i think sharing it is the last step in burying the past. Would love it if more people would post their poetry. x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scarlett fauve Posted April 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 love this x Thanks dani x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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