Roses Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Through the cracks of time I look and stare, Alive but dead, I see it all. The 'bergamasque' of life so colourful and lively, My robes of black conceal my intent. Oh, I can dance my love, so lightly; daintily, Gliding across the surface of your world. You support my frame, you keep my moving, Holding - clutching - grasping - terrified. Awake but asleep my reality is limitless, So many adaptations torment the mind. Embedded in my core, the beliefs of my forebears, The pursuit of perfection a fruitless labour. So I can no longer dance, my sweetheart. The colours fade and the rhythm is lost. I stand beside you; I'm all alone, What becomes of me now I do not know. Do I let reality glide across me? Give in to the natural course of life? Or do I stand proud in my robes of black, For beneath them I am clothed in red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catsmother21 Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 WOW roses this is really good. I really admire you for having a gift like this. xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Thank you Cat xxxxxxx There are dozens more in creatrive corner if you are in a reading mood xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catsmother21 Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Thank you Cat xxxxxxx There are dozens more in creatrive corner if you are in a reading mood xxx I shall have a look x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toaster Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 ((((((((rose)))))))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 i love this roses...hugs xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BimoUK Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Beautiful Roses, simply beautiful. XX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 thank you everyone. I am feeling very sad today, and don't feel like even trying tbh. Feel like i've had enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catsmother21 Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 (((Roses))) please take it easy today. You're allowed to take a day off and do nothing and I hope you feel stronger tomorrow. xxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alaska_Grown Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 :hug2: I LOVE your use of words Roses... I love to write also... but mine is no where near as good as this!! I hope you feel better soon luv.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Roses Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 I'll put this in a crisis post. Sorry x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wynter Grace Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 That's a fantastic poem xxx Wynter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Thank you Wynter x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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