Dani Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 'i'll take an add out in the paper... i will put it for the world to see... im officially broken hearted...and your officially over me. I will shout it from the roof tops... i'll write it in the sand... but everyone who hears me...will never understand. I should be happy you've moved on... should be glad all the hurt has gone... but for me its still so raw... just as open as it felt before. I will put it up on a billboard...an advertisement on tv, your now a free man...officially over me. How did i let you go?why was i a fool? why do i feel so empty?...why does it feel so cruel? i hope you pick up the pieces of your heart... because im slowly losing mine... your officially over me...and i'm officially out of time.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 :( ((((dani)))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Thanks for the hugs..hugs to u too cos i know you need them. i had a dream last night and it brought up these emotions so im just getting them out. but im okay...its from a while bk xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 ty for the hugs glad you are ok xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catsmother21 Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Dani you always write so beautifully and such emotion - I always look forward to seeing what you will write next xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
choochoomama Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 thats really beautiful Dani wish I could write as good as that xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 aww thanks guys xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 ((((((((((((((((((darling Dani-girl))))))))))))))))))))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 :hug2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peregrine Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Well done for writing it out beautifully - in my mind you've done all of what you said you were going to do in your poem, simply just by writing it down. Hope it will ease the pain and be another milestone on your way x x x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 thank you writing it all down is definatley a great outlet for me xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Dani Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 ty toaster!xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 That would make a great song too.....send it off to Pink and Christina at the same time and get them in a bidding war!! Txx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rigger77 Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 that's great stuff dani.. thank's :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roxy222 Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 (((((dani)))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 wow thanks guys. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willtolive Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 Your a beautiful writer Dani. I can see you put your heart into your poems. (((Dani))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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