Dani Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 'sweet 16 ..so innocent and pure... bright blue eyes and wanting so much more. never been hurt..never had a broken heart.. didn't need to sit and cry..didn't yearn for a new start. i remember actually laughing for real... i remember so clearly how wonderful it was to feel. then my bright blue eyes turned grey... my heart turned to stone that day... the day you lay your hands on me... my eyes emptied and i couldnt see. all the beauty dissapeared in my life... my only comfort became a sharp shiny knife.. now i can't look a man in the eye... because i see your face and it makes me cry. my empty eyes will never fill again... so i continue to live in unbearable pain.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 ((((((((((((((((((((((((dani))))))))))))))))))))))))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 i just need someone tonight... who understands.theres no-one. ty walker xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quiteemma Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 ((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((dani)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 thanks hun xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverwolf Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 (((((Dani))))) Sending safe hugs hun x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toaster Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 ((((((((dani)))))))) ill never understand your pain dani but i understand the pain you describe xxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 safe....would be nice to feel that way again. ty siverwolf xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 ty toaster xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peregrine Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 A beautiful and truly touching poem. Besides your knife, you've got wonderful poetry inside of your fine mind - never forget that. I'm there with you in thought, Pere x :hug2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 thank you...writing does help. xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel tears Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 ((((Dani)))) very touching and beautifully written xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 thanks angel xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted November 12, 2010 Report Share Posted November 12, 2010 I am sending lots of love and warm wishes to you Dani-girl. I totally understand and this is beautifully written, I have goosebumps. x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2010 thanks roses.i feel okay today, think it was just last night xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted November 12, 2010 Report Share Posted November 12, 2010 glad you are feeling differently this morning. xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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