Dani Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 'Little miss perfect..always okay, little miss happy...puts her mask on every day. little miss sweetness..no matter how bitter inside, she is little miss pleaser..no matter how much you lied. always walks with confidence..head up and shoulders back, she sometimes just wants to cry..but no she will never do that. little miss professional...always discreet, little miss secretive...every time you'd meet. she is full of colour...there is no black and white.. she will bend over backwards to please you..if its wrong or right. little miss beautiful on the outside where you can see... little miss perfect...no that will never be me. one day you will find its all a mask i wear... then i'll turn around to find...you no longer want to be there.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guntarded Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 That really affected me thank you Dani. I can really relate to this so much. I'm going to print it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 aww gun.im glad it touched you.. though its not a great poem to relate to. ((hugs)) xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
littleweed71 Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 'Little miss perfect..always okay, little miss happy...puts her mask on every day. little miss sweetness..no matter how bitter inside, she is little miss pleaser..no matter how much you lied. always walks with confidence..head up and shoulders back, she sometimes just wants to cry..but no she will never do that. little miss professional...always discreet, little miss secretive...every time you'd meet. she is full of colour...there is no black and white.. she will bend over backwards to please you..if its wrong or right. little miss beautiful on the outside where you can see... little miss perfect...no that will never be me. one day you will find its all a mask i wear... then i'll turn around to find...you no longer want to be there.' you could be describing me dani thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 ((littleweed)) you arent alone in feeling like that. im sure theres more people too xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catsmother21 Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Beautiful and emotive writing as ever and I can relate to a lot of it too Dani - I wish I could write like this xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BimoUK Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Beautifully bittersweet Dani. Change "Little Miss" to "Mister" and I can relate. XX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peregrine Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Wow, Dani, this is so beautiful and how true for many of us. The ending of this poem is amazing - wonderful piece of writing it moved me xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Beautiful and emotive writing as ever and I can relate to a lot of it too Dani - I wish I could write like this xxxx thank you cat.means a lot. and you can write too...give it a try:-) xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Beautifully bittersweet Dani. Change "Little Miss" to "Mister" and I can relate. XX i should have done a mr men version for you guys thanks xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Wow, Dani, this is so beautiful and how true for many of us. The ending of this poem is amazing - wonderful piece of writing it moved me xxx aww thanks. im glad it touched you. wow...means a lot that you guys like it so much xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wynter Grace Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Lovely Brilliant as ever hunni xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 thanks wynter xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maize Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 Sooo relate Dani, thank you for sharing this. Good we aren't alone on this path. ((((Dani)))) *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 thank you maize x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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