Dani Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 'I am always falling...falling into hurt... falling to the ground and crawling through the dirt. always falling...falling into eyes... ones filled with deceitfulness and lies. falling into trouble that takes years to rectify... i fall for people who always make me cry. im sick of falling..why can't i just stand tall? think of myself and forget them all. but now i have this feeling that its happeneing again.. we talk and for those few minutes i feel no pain. always falling...but i dont know what to do.. tell me how do i stop myself when im falling for you?' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean-Ormonde Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 all this poetry going up, I'll have to join in, my poetry is made out of pure undilute suck though =P I like this one though =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 thank u:-) im always posting poems lol. yeah join in...i love to read them .x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean-Ormonde Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 my poetry is a pile of crap usually, it's all pretty samey, my talents lie in fiction-writing really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 thats creative too...maybe you could post little snippets?(if u wanted to) no poetry is crap...as long as it means soomethin to you and helps to write it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean-Ormonde Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 Yeah I might throw up a snippet or two of the novel I'm working on, see what people think =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 brill..i'll look forward to it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean-Ormonde Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 I'll have to choose carefully though, some of what I write could be triggerrific for some folks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 put a trigger warning on it if your worried someone might get triggered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sean-Ormonde Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 I'll probably have to, like any decent writer I purposefully try to invoke emotion in my readers, and sometimes those aren't always happy emotions, when a character dies I want to get the grief to come across strongly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 i love to read things that provoke an emotion in me. some of my poems are like that...some i dont post as theyre too deep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 (((daisy))) lovely prose hun. Straight from the heart and love the rhythm. Sean, I look forward to seeing some of your work x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 thanks roses xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted February 18, 2011 Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 'I am always falling...falling into hurt... falling to the ground and crawling through the dirt. always falling...falling into eyes... ones filled with deceitfulness and lies. falling into trouble that takes years to rectify... i fall for people who always make me cry. im sick of falling..why can't i just stand tall? think of myself and forget them all. but now i have this feeling that its happeneing again.. we talk and for those few minutes i feel no pain. always falling...but i dont know what to do.. tell me how do i stop myself when im falling for you?' That is not just beautiful, that is mega-beautiful.........are you for real?? Txx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 'I am always falling...falling into hurt... falling to the ground and crawling through the dirt. always falling...falling into eyes... ones filled with deceitfulness and lies. falling into trouble that takes years to rectify... i fall for people who always make me cry. im sick of falling..why can't i just stand tall? think of myself and forget them all. but now i have this feeling that its happeneing again.. we talk and for those few minutes i feel no pain. always falling...but i dont know what to do.. tell me how do i stop myself when im falling for you?' That is not just beautiful, that is mega-beautiful.........are you for real?? Txx thanks apollo...ur always very sweet when it comes to my poems xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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