Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 this is a song ive written.i just sing it with the piano so its quite a simple but sweet tune.wanted..well needed to share today. verse1: someone take my heart...its getting too heavy for my chest... its fell apart...and i'm feeling like a total mess.. i can't see..i can't be.. without your arms wrapped around me. someone let me know if i'm okay... i'm just not used to feeling so broken in this way... i look inside and all i find is emptiness... i feel a fool to follow rules when you just don't care less... chours: tell me what am i to do? i just cant get over loving you... and yes i feel just like a fool... how can life be so cruel.. im punished for loving you... verse 2: someone losen up these chains..i feel so suffocated i find it hard to be.. i like it better when it rains..when the world is as sad as me... i think of you every night.. before i dream about when everything was right. your smell..your touch ...your taste ..your skin.. how do i move on when i don't know where to begin? i'm just a sad and lonely fool... i feel i hurt because i'm still in love with you... chours: verse 3.. so stop the clocks and turn them back... i'll make it right and brighten up this lifes thats black.. i'll make you see how i can be... how do i move on when it feels your haunting me.... chours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dice Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 WOW!!! That's made me cry :/ But not in a bad way I think just I really understand that ... * Big hug's * ... P.s It's a really lovely song... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 *wipes ur tears* yeah its a sad love song ...sorry to make you cry xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dice Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Bless you, Hey please don't be sorry it made me cry... It is okay, Promise it is ... It is good to cry ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 these are just some lyrics...im waiting to put them into song. 'i remember we would lie in bed, you would stroke my face and kiss my head. i would feel so safe and warm... whatever made this troubled storm? i loved you more than i can write... i remember every single day and night... wrapped in your arms so protected... but now i feel so hurt..so rejected. you made me realise what love truly meant.. i dont regret a single second that we spent. you are my soul mate and that will never change.. no matter what i say... even if i push you away... i am who i am today... and this girl loves you.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Bless you, Hey please don't be sorry it made me cry... It is okay, Promise it is ... It is good to cry ... we will have a good cry together:-)... i know you of all people understand.xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dice Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 WOW!!! Miss D, It is like your in my head and saying what I am thinking ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 ive got quite a few lyrics to write on here... tho not sure i should post them well ya know. sorry you feel the same way...its not nice xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dice Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Bless you, Hey please don't be sorry it made me cry... It is okay, Promise it is ... It is good to cry ... we will have a good cry together:-)... i know you of all people understand.xx Deal ... Yeah very much, The song and lyrics you have shared today, It is like they fit's me and stuff, If you get what I mean o.O... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dice Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 ive got quite a few lyrics to write on here... tho not sure i should post them well ya know. sorry you feel the same way...its not nice xx Why you not sure about posting them??? I think you should and I would love to read them and I am sure other people will be too ... Nope not nice at all... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 'if theres a chance we'l be okay... im begging you now to just say. i can't take all the memories in my head... i keep going over every word you've ever said. i put my trust in you..i gave it all... id give my life to you...but here i fall. and you just watch me tumble whilst you stand... you don't try to stop me or even reach out your hand. say three words i long to hear... take a way this feeling of me wanting to disapear. wake me up when this is done... can't face the world...the stars ...the sun. let me lie in bed all day... let me case all my hopes away... i wish that you would hold my face... kiss my lips...i miss their taste' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 it can be a bit difficult to post such personal stuff sometimes.kinda makes me feel a little 'open'.xx thanks dice xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dice Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Yeah true, But also some time's it is good to feel a little bit " Open " But not too open at the same time too ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrippleAndStarfish Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Not great with words right now Daisy D, but I think these are all really beautiful, thankyou for sharing them. hugs and love to you xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dibley Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 That's beautiful, you do write the most amazing stuff, and for it to come from the heart, you must be in so much pain. I really feel for you and hope that somehow you manage to get some relief by writing it down the way you do. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 thanks guys. writing it does help a lot. im glad you liked them. i guess heartache is something a lot of people can relate too xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Beautiful and haunting hun. I love your lyrics but I hate the fact that you have so much pain at the same time (if you know what I mean). Thank you so much for sharing these with us, you are brave and inspirational. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 i know what you mean. its good to feel though...makes a change from the numbness xxx hugs to ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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