Roses Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 This poem was really hard to write and I don't feel good about it like I have about others. It doesn't feel right, but then I guess that is the point of the poem as nothing feels the same any more. I have spoken to a good friend on here who has inspired me to write again and also to my husband who suggested if might be a good idea to try and get in touch with my creative side. I'm not sure, but here it is... Painful Poem 2/1/2012 Looking at the year gone by, I wonder how it is that I - Am here to tell the sorry tale, Of the day I really did fail. Sliding into the darkest place, I left this world without a trace. Reverting back to a childish me, My own Mother saw my desperate plea. But deaf were ears of all the Doctors, Other worlds I entered and traversed. Alone in the empty space of time, There was no reason and there was no rhyme. Silent have I been, alone in this, No poems, music, art - none of this. Emotionless, controlled, alone and scared, My whole existence - world was bared. A hole was ripped, never to repair, The option to jump will always be there. Like a crack in the wall - paint it new, But it's always there, seen by you. So windows locked welcomes 2012, I'll try and stay sane, not to delve - Into myself once more to hurt, I hope this lesson I've finally learnt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 ((Roses)) xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catsmother21 Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 ((((Roses)))) I can feel your pain through this poem xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted January 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 Thanks guys, it means a lot that you replied xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 Beautiful poetry from every pore Daily life that you enure With a few lines from your pen Then we see the Roses again Beautiful!!, as always is, a window to another's soul Txx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 Thanks babe, means a lot xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ollieclews Posted January 6, 2012 Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 Thats a beautiful poem Roses, Like Cats I can feel your pain though it xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 ((((Ollie)))) thanks hun xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quiteemma Posted January 29, 2012 Report Share Posted January 29, 2012 (((((((((((((((roses))))))))))))))))))) xxxxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted February 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 Thanks Emma xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ILostHer Posted February 1, 2012 Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 Absolutley heartfelt and beautifully written. I hope you carry on writing more and with your music and art too xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted February 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 Thanks hun xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piuma Posted February 1, 2012 Report Share Posted February 1, 2012 Thanks for sharing Lovely Xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted February 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2012 Thanks for caring m'dear xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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