nathanj Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 You say I’m low in self esteem But I don’t think that’s true I may not wash or comb my hair But I wont be judged by you You say that I’m withdrawing From society at large But if privacy’s a crime Well then I’m guilty as I’m charged Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 That is a very sad content but excellent poetry writing. Has it helped to share? xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nathanj Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 yes it has thanks roses xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 Short but powerful xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angelk01 Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 Yeah that is really an emotive poem and very meaningful and it is very symbolic of how you feel so it's really intelligent the way you have written it. . xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanta Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 This is a short but powerful poem as Daisy said.Good.xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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