Dani Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 this is a song ive written...could trigger depending on how its interpreted 'take my hand...take me to the promised land.. tell me that you understand...the things ive planned.. take the knife..make me want to live this life.. make every wrong into a right... because ive got no fight. chours:take me away...to a place.. where i'll be safe... cos i cant be this girl anymore.. im sure...that your.. the one who's my saviour.... kiss my lips...let me feel how well they fit.. hold me till the candles lit... and your hands are on my broken face.. hold me back from doing what is in my mind.. from making this the only time.. i will hold you ever again.. chours: if you really knew all the things ive been through.. you wouldnt ask me to stay ..you'd let me walk away.. i want that place where its real...its safe.. so let me be... free chours Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Villan Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 beautiful and powerful... and great imagery... xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted March 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 Thank u! This is one of my fave iv written. Melody is so haunting(in a good way) xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Villan Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 yes... haunting... in my head, i had her dressed in a long, light, loose flowing white dress... and the music a bit like the beginning of evanescence bring me to life (before it gets rocky) but maybe a bit slower that's kinda how it spoke to me anyways, hope not too off the mark xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted March 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 Ooooo its not!ur sooooo close! I need to get it recorded.my brother directs and edits music videos so a short vid would b great. Thanks villain! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angelk01 Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 Hello Daisy Duck, this is really emotional and made me cry lol as it really speaks this song in many ways. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted March 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 Aw sorry it made u cry! It was emotional to write too. Xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roses Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 Such brilliant use of words and rhyme as usual hun, I would love to hear this on music xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 Thanks roses:) xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanta Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 Daisy this is really good.xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 Thanks x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted March 7, 2012 Report Share Posted March 7, 2012 Meh...................... I'm sure Boyzone could have written a better song!! Gonna miss you kidda!!...........hope the future holds all you ever wanted Txxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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