walker Posted April 17, 2012 Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 it is a source of great sadness that the person inside who pours her heart out in poetry, seems closed off to us at the moment so we are left making up rather pathetic attempts this is todays - done at unit the topic? A LOVE POEM TO AN OBJECT Tall, dark, silent though you be, you cannot turn away from me. We sit together gazing true. I have no other love, than you. My hands reach out in gentle touch. What you return is just enough. You take my anguish and my pain and play them back again, again. If I am frantic, moving fast, you stay right by me to the last. When tears are pouring, mood is low, it's YOU I turn to since you know.. just how to help me, keep me calm, take it slowly, soothe alarm. Such wisdom as you choose to hide within your body, deep inside. But when we meet we are as one. The love we share is never done. You cannot smile or show you care. You stand aloof and simply stare. The strength you have has always stayed throughout the music we have made. Bar by bar and line by line. I am yours and you are mine. xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christine001 Posted April 17, 2012 Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 oh walker if this is a bad day re poetry then you are simply a genius. I love your poetry i could read it all the time. thank you xxxx is this your piano? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted April 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 thankyou SO much for your kind words christine they mean such a lot yes yes its my dear old piano Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christine001 Posted April 17, 2012 Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 its not about being kind I really really rate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ollieclews Posted April 17, 2012 Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 What a beautiful poem! Thanks for posting walker xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted April 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 thank you xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanta Posted April 17, 2012 Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 Beautiful walker, Thanks for sharing with us.xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starryeyesee Posted April 17, 2012 Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 Like Christine said, I love reading your poetry It's so inspiring xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toaster Posted April 17, 2012 Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 amazing ♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted April 28, 2012 Report Share Posted April 28, 2012 A LOVE POEM TO AN OBJECT Tall, dark, silent though you be, you cannot turn away from me. We sit together gazing true. I have no other love, than you. My hands reach out in gentle touch. What you return is just enough. You take my anguish and my pain and play them back again, again. If I am frantic, moving fast, you stay right by me to the last. When tears are pouring, mood is low, it's YOU I turn to since you know.. just how to help me, keep me calm, take it slowly, soothe alarm. Such wisdom as you choose to hide within your body, deep inside. But when we meet we are as one. The love we share is never done. You cannot smile or show you care. You stand aloof and simply stare. The strength you have has always stayed throughout the music we have made. Bar by bar and line by line. I am yours and you are mine. xx As one does at unit!! As if I wasn't already in love with your heart, now you have to add your soul, TOO cruel, too cruel!! Absolutely stunning and beautiful prose............ ........and you deserve your wishes, I hope your dreams come true!! Txx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted April 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2012 ty ty but really - honestly - dont think its good and now cant write a thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenthing Posted April 28, 2012 Report Share Posted April 28, 2012 walker, it is beautiful, simply beautiful really, truly, magically beautiful you are a natural poet and i could read what you write all day don't worry about the muse - she will return in her own sweet time and you will sit down and write and write and write Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pickle59 Posted April 28, 2012 Report Share Posted April 28, 2012 An absolutely beautiful poem.xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordsmithy Posted May 3, 2012 Report Share Posted May 3, 2012 Walker, that's pretty decent writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted May 7, 2012 Report Share Posted May 7, 2012 ty ty but really - honestly - dont think its good and now cant write a thing Dagger to the heart!! If you can't write again, how will I breathe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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