JoshuaGG Posted April 22, 2012 Report Share Posted April 22, 2012 The world sits at my fingertips; Foreign, distant. Agony writhes within, Such a gentle caress. I want to feel Intensely. Yearning for the fiery acid rainbow, A crack in endless dusk. I want back what is lost. I had it once, Forgotten now. Something to go with Angry, Sad, Wistful, Drunk. The spark. Soul fuel. I want to want to sleep. I want tomorrow to influence today. I want that look in your eyes. I want the hood off mine. I want reassurance. Validate me, please. Nights are the worst, The world sleeps and I drift. Weathered walls are flaking. I am so tired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
catsmother21 Posted April 22, 2012 Report Share Posted April 22, 2012 Oh gosh - I felt every word of that - hope you are ok xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoshuaGG Posted April 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2012 Thank you, catsmother. Travelling a little rough, these things happen though. Writing helps, so does having these replies that I can look back on when I'm having a hard time of it. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasmineRose Posted April 24, 2012 Report Share Posted April 24, 2012 I particuarly like the first two verses. They could even stand alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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