walker Posted July 13, 2012 Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 TRAITOR I am your traitor; inside you I have betrayed We are alongside eachother, a lifetime shared You suffer and we felt your pain Our tangled beings hiding their secrets One with desires destroying innocence Others, drawn together in fear Each uniqueness bound within all I am your traitor; exposing you to those beyond Forgive me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlylight1 Posted July 13, 2012 Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 very powerful poem. (((walker))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted July 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 guess it sums up what we have done/are doing bizarre maybe that we are betraying those inside our own head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted July 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 fk poetry fk all of it its all a heap of shit and this is not wanting u to say otherwise we dont give a fk as we know its all shit anyway it says nothing its all crap forget it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
morethanme Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 Its ok We understand it says all and we hear u all mtm xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 SUBLIME You don't just write, you paint and sculpt with words, crafting each letter and sentence to a masterpiece!! Txxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benway Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 This poem is describing the guilt, fear and doubht that you must be feeling . ((walker)) It is good to have this gift to be able to express your pain so well , writing such poetry must be catharthic , thank you for sharing that , take care , love & hugs xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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