Dani Posted November 10, 2012 Report Share Posted November 10, 2012 How I'd forgotten..the relief you gave.. The calmness you brought in the mess you made. How I'd forgotten..the feeling so strong.. The way you made me feel eventhough I know it was wrong. Just me and you alone..no-one had to know, You were my secret so I couldn't let the marks show. So just now when I need you the most.. You take away the numbness when I'm feeling like a ghost. Watching you..glide along my skin.. How could I have forgotten that you had me from within. My oldest friend..the best relationship made.. How I'd forgotten..you..my blade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AmyP Posted November 11, 2012 Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 very chilling hun, really well written xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 Thank u xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jinxsta Posted November 11, 2012 Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 Really good, rolls off the tongue. xx xx xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 Thanks jinx xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anabas Posted November 11, 2012 Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 I really liked that & could relate. xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanta Posted November 11, 2012 Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 I agree with Pandora very chilling but very well written.xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2012 Thanks guys Not wrote about stuff like this for ages. Xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maddy harper Posted November 21, 2012 Report Share Posted November 21, 2012 i really like that daisy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted November 21, 2012 Report Share Posted November 21, 2012 this is amazingly written hun ...exceptional but at the same time....makes me worry for u xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx love u to bits xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dani Posted November 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2012 Thanks maddy x Aww jades I'm fine,its frm the pastxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jades Posted November 21, 2012 Report Share Posted November 21, 2012 glad about that hun!!! it's so well written and i'd say perfect! i'm glad ur so doing well in ur head u can explore the past and horrors n make it into something beautiful and (i can't find the right words but ...) visit that bad time n resolve it in a beautiful way xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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