wordsmithy Posted January 16, 2013 Report Share Posted January 16, 2013 Sharks teeth gulf to gulf carving cave walls tall and old these little paintings at child’s height all felt-tip and hb pencil singing tape recorder song: pretend, be retro-king and dying queen “The dark haired dark eyed boy died (his tomato kiss) with a drink in his hand” I’d join him, but they, the people their bible quotes, self-help books promises of empathy retain, restrain, delay, I would join you. Good spring day, to my feet space beneath. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saharah Blue Posted January 18, 2013 Report Share Posted January 18, 2013 Good spring day, to my feet space beneath. Love this part at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted January 20, 2013 Report Share Posted January 20, 2013 Phwoar!! Felt-Tip And Hb Pencil had me all kind of excited there as I thought I had encountered the next big sexual hyperbole .....But on a serious note.....insightful, serious and delightful.....love the dark undertones but not sure that the message will hit the intended target?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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