walker Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 WE ARE DONE What is in us? What evil was planted within? Placed in our being for others. Such vileness, such badness grown inside for their use. Beyond our bounds, forbidden, yet like a magnet drew them in. We must sit beside this foul serpent as she writhes beneath their touch, deceiving our very soul as a waterfall of tears flows through us. There are things held within us, deeply rooted exposures that we cannot pin down. Each one turns to search their own truth yet those forgotton memories are welded in the past. Their immediacy long since shuttered by the cloud of history, punished by threats of nakedness, baring their created vileness to the world. We are done! Made whole yet broken. There is a Never, deep inside; a wholeness always missing. From our beginnings that serpent wove herself between us, her filthy fire burning holes in each as they were formed. Cut her out, and we will cave. Keep her, and we will forever be held hostage to our venom riddled vulnerability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted June 12, 2013 Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 Am I allowed, it should be asked, to worship one, so riddled, with venom and vileness that the World should beware?.................. When, all I see is Goodness.........a heart that I wish would beat beneath my own breast, a mind that bedazzles and bewitches with such intricacy of word-craft and, a soul, such a delicate, lovely, flower of a soul.................a white Lily, perfumed and crafted by the Gods!!. Walker.............don't let them drag you down to their dour, pervasive and insipid level......YOU are worth so much more than their petty lives combined..................Majesty can only be encompassed by the MAJESTIC....................Girl, you have the corner on that!!. Txxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted June 12, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 you are too kind, Apollo !! there is something so hard we are trying to say with this poem but it still doesnt say it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted June 12, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 we had emailed it to psych its not right but he says he understands what we are saying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pickle59 Posted June 12, 2013 Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 (((((((Walker))))))))..............When you next see your psych, could you ask them to relay to you what they think you are saying.............it might just be, that this amazingly powerful poem is saying to them, more than you think.xxx I love all of what Apollo has said, and echo it too.xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted June 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2013 yes we only spoke about it in the last few mins this week and he just said he understood we have spoken in parts about it before but at the moment he is 2 hours away so we just talk over the phone it is something that we don't feel we can escape from (ed. actually, its all bloody stupid, why do we write all this rubbish and where the hell does it come from, it doesn't come from us, why is it even there?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordsmithy Posted June 14, 2013 Report Share Posted June 14, 2013 Oh, painfully spoken, if I had the guts to bare my soul like you do, Walker, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walker Posted June 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2013 oh serious kid we no doubt should not say so much things pour from us far far too much we were always told for that - our whole life and still now our friend has just read the poem she said it is a hard read (emotionally) we never really think of our words shaking others perhaps that is too selfish of us add it to our blindness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo 13 Posted June 19, 2013 Report Share Posted June 19, 2013 add it to our blindness When it is you that can see while all about you are blind.....that would indeed be a travesty!! tXX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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