morethanme Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 shes crying right now shes gone left us i dont blame her shes hurt upset of course shes never heard she never was how little she feels its always them who matter others who are older louder they laugh of course its theyre feelings that matter just shut up u dont matter of course not shes gone now shes not returning doesnt matter what happened to her just shut up and hide away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dice Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 Why is she crying??? Of course it MATTERS what has happened to her, It matters to you all too!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lily-Bee Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 Yes it matters and you matter. Were here if you want to talk. Lily Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PDBPD Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 Of course you matter..... Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
morethanme Posted September 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 im not talking about me. i know i matter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dice Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 But your talking about one of the others and you all matter!!!... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
morethanme Posted September 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 some dont some do some cry some die some hurt some laugh some fly some sink some swim some love some hate some split some mend some hide some fear some cry some die some bleed some wail some sleep some fail some weak some trail some pain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pickle59 Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 ((((((morethanme)))))))) All of you and what you express matters ............Pickles.xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtMatters Posted September 29, 2013 Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 woah morethanme you know what's kind of freaky the thing you just typed the last one I wrote a poem in a similar set up as that one a long time ago it was like my first poem... I'll post it here it's not exactly relevant but I think you will see the similarity of the structure so I just thought that was kind of cool sorry about the pain behind your words I think people might be reading it a bit litterally but I think there is pain there none the less anyways here's the one I was talking about you laugh, I cry you grin, I sigh you speak, I fall you hide, I call you're strong, I shake your voice, I break you win, I lose you ask, I choose I leave, you stay I'm night, you're day I'm cold, you're hot I'm scorned, you're sought I bleed, you heal you're numb, I feel I long, you lust I fear, you trust you live, I wait you fish, I bait you bite, I bark you're light, I'm dark you draw, I paint you're known, I ain't you shine, I'm flat you're gloss, I'm matte I yearn, you fly you're how, I'm why I search, you seek I'm rough, you're sleek I'm sick, you're broke I'm raw, you smoke I'm orange, you're blue I'm me, you're you you're hurt, I'll go I failed, you know I'm stuck, you're free I'm here, you'll see.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pepsimeg Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 Wow mtm i didnt know u wrote this much love S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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