My Broken Verse

[FleeingFox]

Hi everyone, I'm going to take us less space on this forum with my stuff by keeping all my verse in this thread from now on.

Could I ask folk not to post responses here, I'm not trying to be rude, I'd VERY happily accept comments as PM's should anyone wish to.

It's just that if people post responses here too, this thread will become monstrously cluttered.

Thanks in advance for your kind support.......

[FleeingFox]

CRUMBLE AND FADE

That Sweet,

Romantic Scent lingers,

Heavy Iron;

You Do Not Know,

What I Am,

I Crave Her Kiss;

Glinting Silver,

Slash And Gash,

Deep Yearning;

Confessing My Sins,

She Always Forgives Me;

Her Caress Runs Deep,

Hot Crimson Flow,

Upon Cold Skin;

Fire Burns,

Like Ice In My Veins,

Please Save Me;

Little Concern,

For The Scars,

Do Not Fucking Touch;

Get Away From Her,

I Need,

To Go To Sleep;

Sometimes I Despise,

That What I Am,

Always Wanting,

Ever Needing;

Bone White Glimpse,

Oh My Love,

Your Kiss So Deep;

Take Me Again,

In Your Dark Embrace,

Let Me Rest;

Life,

Of Harrowing Sorrow,

Nothing,

But Pain For Me;

I Am The Creation,

Of Death Denied,

It Is Calling;

How Long,

Must I Save Myself,

Your Promise A Lie;

Endless Night,

Does My Infant Wail Touch,

Forever Alone;

Heaven Will Not Take Me,

The Devil Knows Better;

Alone Inside Myself,

Will Not Someone,

Kill The Pain;

Nothing I Can Do,

To Put An End,

To This Fear;

You Mock Me,

Yet You Know Nothing,

I Am Not You;

Mourning For The Loss,

Of Such Completeness,

I Am Drowning;

Take My Hand,

Walk With Me,

In The Pale Moonlight;

Every Fibre,

Of My Being Is Ablaze,

I Am Dying Inside;

Reach For My Fingers,

They Crumble,

And Fade Away;

No-One Knows,

The Pain I Carry,

Alone,

Will I Die…

[FleeingFox]

BAD PAIN IN ME

Set Up To Drown,

In Crucifying Darkness;

Taught Only Hatred,

Expected To Be Peaceful;

Granted The Honour,

To Know Exquisite Pain;

Wanted Nothing More,

Than To Stop Screaming;

Dragged Kicking,

Thrashing,

Through Blackest Horror;

Became Most Foul Creature,

Despised By All;

Sacrificed Tormented Soul,

Still Found No Rest;

Unable To Laugh,

Without Weeping Within;

Promised Delights Of Heaven,

Delivered Unto Hell;

Yearned To Trust,

Tried Desperately To Believe;

Over And Again,

Beaten Furiously By The Feeding Hands;

Came To Realise,

There Is No Such Paradise;

Sick And Demented Betrayers,

Humankind;

Forced To Dwell,

In The Jaws Of Death,

No-one Cares;

Bones Dislocated,

Swollen Joints Healed In Shadows;

Wished So Many Times,

For God To Take Me Away;

Softly Whispered Prayers,

Always Went Unheard;

Looked Out Of Stained Windows,

Felt The World Crying;

Flesh Pounded Until Purpled Black,

Am I So Evil;

The Wicked Must Be Purified,

Knew My Place;

Victim Of The System,

Devil Hot On Blistered Heels;

Each Blessing Given,

Destroyed Another Ray Of Hope;

Learnt Fast,

Fell Upon Aching Knees,

Without Falter;

One Day This Will All End,

Mommy And Daddy Will Come;

Such Time Did Not Come To Pass,

Did Not Understand;

Why Am I Here,

What Did I Do That Was So Bad;

Cannot Make Sense Of These People,

They Are So Cruel;

Preach About This Loving God,

Then Hurt Me Some More;

Have Things Inside,

Things That Are Not Right;

There Is A Bad Pain In Me,

Feels As Though I Am Breaking;

Won’t Someone Take This Hurt Away,

I Am So Alone;

No-one Will Hold Me,

I Feel Like Crying…

[FleeingFox]

CRIMSON LAKES AND OCEANS

Holding On Tight,

I Believed In You,

It Will Be Alright;

By My Side,

Is Where You,

Always Walked,

Yet No More;

It Is Okay,

I Shall Keep You Safe,

From The Demons;

Do Not Shed,

Another Tear,

Wipe Them,

From Your Eyes;

No One Can Steal,

Your Breath Away,

I Am Here;

Those Were The Gifts,

You Bestowed Upon Me;

You Gladly,

Carried My Sorrow,

Upon Your Aching Back;

Keep Your Head Tall,

Stay Strong,

I Will Never Leave You;

Nothing In This World,

Nor Beyond,

Can Pull Us Apart;

That Is What You Said,

I Never Doubted,

Not One Word;

You Have Condemned Me,

To A Living Hell,

Why;

Lakes And Oceans,

Of Crimson Tears,

Flood From Within Me;

Where Have You Gone,

Who Will Protect Me Now;

Do You Not Know,

That I Am Hiding,

From The Monster;

Without The Strength,

You Gave Me,

I Am waiting To Die;

All The World,

Is Falling Apart,

It Cuts So deep;

Voices Of Harrowed Despair,

Haunt My Pounding Mind;

Please Wont Someone,

Tell Me,

It Is Going To Be,

Alright;

Our Plans Demand,

Me And You,

It Is All Over;

Just Once More,

I Need To Look,

Into Your Eyes;

Touch The Ground,

Can You Not,

Feel Me Trembling;

Who Would Ever,

Imagine What Has,

Happened In Me;

I Am Going,

Out Of My Mind,

This Pain,

Is Ever Deepening;

Dark And Stormy,

Clouds Overhead,

I Am,

Silent Screaming;

My Destiny,

Was Blown Away,

Oh So Slowly,

Do I Decay…

[FleeingFox]

I FELL SIR

Broken Bones, Price Demanded, Paid In Full;

Seen The Underside Of Humanity, Foulest Stench;

Tasted The Venom Of Shattered Trust, Choked On It;

Felt Its Fury, As Bruised Limbs Swell;

Knew That Without Doubt, Too Late, Cannot Escape;

Scream And Yell, Flesh Shivers, Torso Stiffens;

Must Find A Way, Have To Get Out Of Here;

Brightest Rays Of Hope, Bring Only Darkness;

Reach Out Blindly, Contacting The Nothingness;

Draw Breath, Painfully Deep, Cracked Ribs Shudder;

Got Strongest Feeling, Worse Still Is Yet To Come;

Guts Twist Agonisingly, Complaint For Emptiness;

Hoping Someone Will Arrive, Take This Fear Far Away;

Cannot Dwell Inside A Lie, Error Of Mortal Consequence;

Made Every Sacrifice, Endured Each Torturous Form;

Drank Hot Fluid Waste, Gorged On Sickening Solid;

Will Not Surrender To Such Monstrosity;

Snapped Dislocated Fingers, Back Into Raging Sockets;

Clenched Teeth Full Force, Stifle Any Possible Cry Out;

Upon Each Vile Visitation, Visualised Distant Paradise;

Do As You Will, This Flesh Is All You Can Take By Force;

Looked Into The Void, Found Sanctuary Awaiting;

More Viciously Savage Beatings, I Am Still Alive;

Took All Those Animals Could Give, Limp And Battered;

Came Greater Extent Of Silence, Lack Of Action Taken;

As A Tethered Beast, Tugged And Pulled On Lashings;

Finally Movement, Strain To Hear, No Sounds Came;

Brutal Commands Given, Muscles Obey, Searing Pain;

Sunlight Blinds, Fresh Air At Last, Bile Contortion;

Vow Of Secrecy, Speak No Words, Fell Over Sir…

[FleeingFox]

DARK REGIONS

Muscular Spasming Contractions, Cold Sweating;

Startled Frightfully Into Hostile Waking World;

Drawing Breath Rapidly, Heart Racing Ferociously;

Blurred Vision Attempts Focus, Fear Freezes Solid;

Steel Nerves Falter, Fighting Back Nausea Waves;

Damned Reality Breaks, Senses Reeling Once Again;

Pushing Aside Confusion, Cursing Sleeps Release;

Thought Process Cold Starts, Entire Being Complains;

Flashing Dreamland Images, Taunt Weakened Defences;

Dreams Relentlessly Following, Memories Burning;

Touch Present Realms Base, Feels Nothing Solidly;

Shadows Move Menacingly, Doubt Quickly Builds;

Faces Looming From Dark Regions, Hunger Beckons;

Place Feet Upon Solid Ground, Connection Denied;

Smacking Aching Lips, Still Taste Blood Strong;

Remembering Nightmare, Luckily Escaped;

Attempt Torso Straightening, Limbs Surrender;

Brace Against, Brutal Fallen Pain Receptors;

Nocturnal Feasting, Sole Intention…

[FleeingFox]

I SAW ME TOO

Shockingly Busy As Usual, Dodging Bully Boy Morons;

Racing Barefoot, Through All Too Well Known Streets;

Scampering From Niche To Niche, Scouring Eyes;

Alert To Every Nuance, Senses Matching Full Throttle;

Evading Human Contact, At All Cost;

Terrified By Every Movement, In The Shadows;

Something Unseen Startles Enough To Stop Dead;

Icy Prickles Course Through Aching Skull;

Directly Ahead, The Light Shimmers, Then It Is Gone;

From Behind, Approaching Fast, Stamping Feet;

Twisting Neck, With Lightning Reflexes Took To Flight;

Nine Village Deadheads, Bearing Down Viciously;

Like The Wind, Flashing Past Building After Building;

At Suicidal Velocity, Veering Corners, Increasing Speed;

Gasping For Vital Oxygen, Limbs Begin To Falter;

Just A Few More Paces, Almost At The Woods;

Out Of Nowhere, The Shimmer Appears Again;

No Time To Stop This Time, Hurtle Past It;

Hot On Aching Heels, The Deadheads Are Gaining Ground;

They Either Do Not See It Or Simply Ignore The Shimmer;

Finally, One More Corner, Safety Of The Canopy Beckons;

Splintering Pain In Left Ankle, Threatens To Surrender;

Concentrate, Override The Broken Glass Sensation;

With Desperation For Fuel, Accelerate Further;

Take The Last Corner, With Murderous Precision;

Asylum Granter In Sight, The Shimmer Re-emerges;

Cannot Evade It, Have No Choice But To Stop Dead;

From Within The Shimmering Light, A Figure Moves;

Confusion And Fear Urges Action, Savagely Attack It;

Pursuing Deadheads Halted, Watched In Disbelief;

Falling Through The Figure, Striking Tarmac Hard;

Look Back With Sheer Dread, Eyes Focus Sharply;

Brain Stalls, Self Witness Self Upon Tarmac;

Thoughts Jumble In Chaotic Havoc, Twinned Vision;

Self Witness Is Glared Upon With Intense Ferocity;

Jumping Without Falter Onto Complaining Feet;

Too Dazed And Too Stunned To Figure Events Clearly;

Muscles Tense Abruptly, Prepared To Launch Assault;

Eyes Meet Eyes, Shimmer Is Pursued, Pursued Is Shimmer;

For A Blindingly Painful Instance, The Two Became One;

Throbbing Head Contends To Be Looking Into A Mirror;

Another Moment Flashes By, Tree Asylum Reappears;

Stunned Senses Search For The Reflective Surface;

Only What Should Be, Is, Contorting Pain Hits Skull;

Knees Fail, Hands Thud Heavily On Tarmac;

Guts Twist And Wretch, Vomit Erupts With Force;

With Great Concern, Eyes Scan Deadheads;

Faces Are Riddled With Baffled Terror;

Their Eyes Fixed Firm, Burning Into Their Once Target;

Monstrous Wave Of Nausea Hits Hard, Readily Sinks In;

Just For An Instant, I Saw Me, I Saw Me Too…

[FleeingFox]

DYING GLANCE

Clapping Thunder, Disturbs Cold Black Night;

Fevered Nightmares, Relinquish Hold Reluctantly;

Secrets Escape Demented Minds, Contorting;

Ice Winds Whisper, Tree Leaves Cackle;

Lonely Stone Cold Stance, Embittered Rage;

Hands Clench Fiercely, Deaths Perfume Stench;

Evil Illusions Rampage, Reprieve Unreachable;

Offered Hades Command, Unable, Never Unwilling;

Heart Shattering Wings Unfold, Blacker Than Pitch;

Savage Brutality Within, Way Beyond Daemonical;

Exhale Rotten Flesh Breath, Glaring Gaze Scouring;

Eruptive Roaring Attack, Blazing Chaos Ensues;

Risen From Captive Hostility, Ascends Into Vengeance;

Clawed Fingers Snatching, Broken Teeth Gnashing;

Frozen Emotions Thaw, Reforming Ancient Ways;

Prisoners Never Sought, Devour Each Betrayer;

Hurtling Across Horizon, Shadows Themselves Falter;

Stops Dead, Attention Sharply Drawn;

Automatic Responses Engage, Animal Lurching Attack;

Sympathy Alien Concept, Crushing Bone Breaking Blows;

Feeds Frenziedly, Drinking Deep, Swallows Hard;

Pleas For Mercy Ignored, Fuels Starvation Hunger;

Moments From Death, Draws Head From Quarry;

Dying Glance Meets Fury Filled Glare;

Terror Strikes Deeper, Remember Me…

[Bryan]

Very deep. As always I really enjoy reading your broken verse. You do a great job at imagery. I can definately feel the pain.

[FleeingFox]

FLAMES OF VENGEANCE

Burn Up Inside, Brutalising Hatred Screaming;

Narrowing Eyes Focusing, Frantically Searching;

Paid The Price, Over And Again, Still Want More;

Roll Over, Show Soft Underside, Go To Hell;

Give It Your Best Shot, Make Your Aim True;

Could Never Hope To Meet More Savage Hate;

Wanna Kill You, One And All, Sickness Putrefies;

Far Too Late, Do Not Ask Forgiveness;

Hands Raised High, Swift Demise Granted;

Take No Prisoners, No Quarter Given, Your Rules;

Twisted And Demented, Destroyed By Brutality;

Screamed Oh So Loud, Pleaded For Mercy;

Vermin Have Cleaner Souls, Such Black Bile Lust;

Sick Of Your Bitter Words, Nothing But Lies;

Go On, Shed Your Tears, Weep You Fucking Bastards;

Through All The Pain And Horror, Something Was Born;

It Seems You Stand In Dismay, Get On Your Knees;

Look Into These Blazing Orbs, Witness This Rage;

Shut Your Fucking Mouths, Your Breath Stinks;

Now The Term Of Suffering, It Seeks New Flesh;

Tear Your Fear From The Deepest Place, Taste It;

The Time Is Here, Your Turn To Stare Into Hell;

Suffer Bruised Swollen Limbs, Scream For Me;

Listen Carefully, Sweetest Snap-Cracking Of Your Bones;

Your Minds Will Race With Terror, Now Bleed For Me;

Save Your Pleas, This Monster Is Wide Awake Now;

Louder, Scream Louder, Are You Ready, I Want More;

As Your Spine Cracks, The Flames Of Vengeance Burn;

No Other Reason For This Horror, I Hate You…

[FleeingFox]

DRY TEARS

Oceans Of Tears Shed, Still Not Enough;

Flesh Bruised And Swollen, Never Satisfies;

Become Dead Inside, Brings No Gratification;

Worked Fingers To The Bone, Demand More Still;

Cowered Before Devouring Wrath, Soul Destroying;

Followed Every Command, Beatings Worsen;

Spilled Blood Time And Again, Thirst Unquenched;

Existed In Misery, Expect Greater Suffering;

Dreams Filled With Horror, Mercilessly Forced To Sleep;

Raged With The Devil ‘Til Lungs Burn, Crack Lashing Whip;

Suffered Every Torture, Cannot Scream Loud Enough;

Go Down On Knees In Surrender, Turn Away In Disgust;

This World Has Ravaged This Body, Stare Blankly;

Endured The Unbearable, No Stone Left Unturned;

Lack Of Context, Tells More Than Words Can Express;

Sit Upon Broken Glass, Drink Molten Metal;

Push Thorns Into Raw Wounds, Slice Skin Open;

Not One Whimper, Not Even As Much Will Do;

Begging And Pleading, What Do You Want;

Cannot Bleed Enough, Silent Screams Are Empty;

Tried To Die, Freedom From Hell Was Denied;

Forced Atrocities Accepted, Without Wincing;

Single Question Remains, When Will It Ever End;

Aching To Be Released, Yearning To Be Free;

Talk With Angels, They Mock And Despise;

Seek Out Daemons, None Dare Show Their Faces;

Eternally Alone, Upon This Cold And Savage Land;

Until The Time Comes, Living With Tattered Faith;

A Stranger Amongst Strangers, Weeping Dry Tears;

Look Deep Into These Eyes, Witness Such Sorrow…

[FleeingFox]

ETERNAL SEARCH

Searching, Ceaselessly, For Countless Time;

How Long Must I Walk This Land, Before I Find You;

Catching Fleeting Glimpses, Dancing In The Shadows;

Aching, Yearning, Desiring, Wanting, Needing;

Not Even The Sun, Can Penetrate This Gloom;

Shrieks Of Child Delight, Stabs Deep, Again And Again;

I Know You Are Out There, I Can Feel You In Me;

How Does The Untouchable, Remain Untouched;

Why, Does The Imperceptible, Remain Unseen;

Heart Beating, Bleating, Faltering And Thumping;

My Voice Is Silent, As I Scream At The Moon;

She Cannot Hear Me, She Will Not Hear Me;

Juddering, Shuddering, Trembling In Anticipation;

I Have Felt Your Eyes, Caress My Aching Body;

Imagined Your Warmth, Radiate Inside Of Me;

Dizzily Fantasised, Of Your Lips, Pressed Firm;

This Pain, Is Getting Too Much, To Endure;

Almost Every Form Of Worldly Pain, Have I Known;

Mere Shadows, Of A Greater Being As Compared;

Slowly, Yet So Agonisingly Surely, I Weaken;

Torturous Paths, Hath My Search Shown Me;

The Face Of Evil, I Have Known, I Fear It Not;

Haunted And Terrified Now, My Search Is Failing;

These Eyes Of Blue, Search And Search, Until Crimson Red;

Hovering, Wavering, Hesitating, On The Edge;

Into, The Great, Abyssal Unknown, I Surrender;

I Love You, With All That I Am;

Death Beckons, Can I Dream, Dream Of You…

[FleeingFox]

ARCHED ROAR

Fading In And Out, Nothing Appears Solid;

Dark Clouds, Loom Threateningly Overhead;

Cracking Claps Of Thunder, Shatter Night Silence;

Mouth Dry As Paper, Lips Sore And Splitting;

Raw Eyes Struggle To Focus, Shadows Bob And Weave;

No Signs Of Life, Upon Barren Horizon;

Time Itself Appears Frozen, Breath Held In Terror;

Age Old Superstitions, Play Havoc On Tattered Nerves;

Nobody Cares To See, That Which Pains Vision;

Small Child Stumbles Onward, Hunched And Staggering;

Blood Trickles From A Gaping Jaw, Limply Slack;

Wincing Pitifully As Legs Surrender, Falls Heavily;

Swollen Bruised Body, Complains At Impact On Dirt;

Face First Into The Ground, Sickening Crack Sounds;

With Feeble Strength Remaining, Attempts To Stand;

Teeth Bite Down Hard, Expression Of Determination;

As A Wild Beast Pursued, Head Snaps About Fiercely;

Spittle And Blood Fly From Infant Mouth, Single Cry Out;

Pursuers Hot On His Heels, Lurches Into Manic Flight;

One Injury Too Many, Muscles Fail Once More;

Striking The Ground Once More, Shoulder First, Screams Now;

This Cannot Be Real, Plead For It Not To Be Happening;

Wasted Dreams, Merciful Death, Exact Your Toll;

Something Moves, Just Out Of Focus Range;

Heart Skips A Beat, Familiar Is The Snarling Growl;

As A Ferocious Animal, Roaring With Arched Back;

Nervous Scampering, Signals Break In Savage Beating;

You Will All Pay Dearly, Eyes Locked, Sibling Defence;

Thought This To Be The Last Day, Look At Him Go;

What Would Come Of This Child, If Ever Was Alone…

[FleeingFox]

DISSOLVED BY DECAY

Sweet Angelic Bells, Chiming Overhead;

Whispered Words Of Love Bereft, Linger On;

Tears Of Woe, Quenching Tired Earth;

Blinding Blackness, Nerves Cease Tingling;

Glum Faces, Flinching Against Ferocious Rays;

Cold Air Dampening Stiffened Limbs;

Beautified By Final Peace, Tantalisingly Pretty;

Sunk Down Deep, Ailments Out Of Time;

Choices Ran Dry, Cruel World Slammed Hard;

Fought Valiantly, During Existence Ordeals;

Personal War, Unseen By Blind Indifference;

Hands Firm Still In Place, Supplicate No More;

Tried Desperately To Be Heard, Screams Silenced;

Soft Lips, Crack And Split, Can Never Kiss Again;

Relentless Torrential Pain, Has Been Taken Away;

No Longer Longing, An End To Needing;

Sibling Memories, Unable To String And Devour;

Thundering Storms Of Panic, Dissolved By Decay;

Weep Not, Let It Rain Instead;

An End Of Sickness, Putrefying The Troubled Mind;

Confines Of Timber, Welcome Absence Of Fear;

Open Wide, Energy Of One, Joins Ancestral Plains;

Desires Are The Weakness Of Life Under Threat;

Finally Able To Rest, Comes Now, Eternal Peace…

[FleeingFox]

I AM NOT LIKE YOU

Frenzied Beast Wail, Rents Silent Night Air;

Thunder Rumbles, Lightning Flash And Crash;

A Million Decibels, Will Not Force Your Hate Away;

I Found A Place, Where Your Eyes, Cannot Penetrate;

Go On, Try To Smash It Down, We Are Together Now;

The Harder You Slash And Gash, The Stronger We Become;

Your And Demented Wails, Go Unheard By Us;

Shout It Out, Scream As Loud As You Can, You Have Lost;

Our Way, Is Not Your Way, We Will Uncover You;

Hiding In Broad Daylight, Will Not Work, Not Anymore;

Your Heart Is Purest Evil, You Are Out Of Control;

Now Comes Our Time, To Laugh At Your Plight;

It Is coming For You, Cannot Stop, The Eyes Of Truth;

Dark And Deadly Games, Will Not Help You Now, Fool;

My Mind, Is Screaming For Vengeance, I Am Not Like You;

Taking Me, On Your Poisonous Path, You Are Totally Insane;

I Spit You Out, As Your Bitter Taste, Burns My Mouth;

You Are A Disgrace, Your Fear Of Love, Is Vile Stench;

The Lord Our God, Is Always Watching, Bides His Time;

Cut Me Again, It Is Alright, You Will Be Screaming Next;

Nothing Can You Do, To Save Your Blackened Heart;

You Have No Soul, Inside Of You, Your Life Is A Joke;

See Me Now, I Am Sitting Way Up High, You Are Lost;

Listen To The Whispers, On The Wind, They Call Your Name;

Hold On Tight, You Are In For The Ride Of Your Life;

You Must And Will, Pay For All The Sorrow, Listen;

The Tide Of Time, Goes On Into Infinity, It Is Too Late;

We Remain Intact, We Grow In Number, I Pity You;

No Tears For Tomorrow, You Are So Hollow;

I Weep, For You All…

[FleeingFox]

YOU ACHE AS I DO

Open The Curtains, See The Beauty Of Your Horror;

Curse Me For Your Sins, Condemned By Your Hatred;

Have You No Control, I Am Not The One You Think I Am;

Look At Me, What Do You See, I Know, A Monster;

Even During The Night, Am I Haunted By Your Crimes;

Nothing Can Ever Change, What You Truly Are, So Cruel;

You Love The Terror, You Put Me Through, Savage;

Step Aside, Just For One Moment, Let Me See The Real You;

It Does Not Matter, How Hard You Try To Hide;

Paint Your Ugly Faces, Until You Blind With Beauty;

That Is The Saddest Part, You Will Never Know, Fools;

When You Look In The Mirror, Who Is Looking Back At You;

Face The Facts, You Will Not Ever Do, The Truth Hurts;

Put On Your Fancy Dresses, Wear Those Masques;

Stupid, I Pray For The Day, When You See The Real Me;

I Have Wept For You, I Have Bled For You, I Pray For You;

Count Those You Can Rely Upon, Do You See, It Is Illusion;

Sit Beside Me, Watch The Moon Shine, In The Heavens;

We Can All Dream, Of Better Days, Dreams Are Fantasy;

Reach Deep Inside Yourself, You Ache As I Do For Peace;

I Know, You Hate My Words, I Am A Stupid Dreamer;

Take My Hand, Walk With Me A While, Reflect;

It Is Easy To Forgive, Touch Your Soul;

We Are In Eden, Now…

[FleeingFox]

Links to my older pieces on-site:-

Weaken:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7049

Cosmetic Decay:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7057

White Collar Hole:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7058

Fading Vision:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7064

Celebrating Idiocy:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7153

Love Thy Neighbour:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7154

Slow Death:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7145

Sahfyre's First Smile:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7209

Skull Wall:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7237

No Rewind:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=7248

War Mongers:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=8429

Twitch:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=8452

I Can Feel You:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=8481

Blizzard Cold:

http://www.bpdworld.org.uk/index.php?showtopic=8506

This thread is finished....please feel free to put in comments now, if you want to of course. Thankyou all for being so patient and understanding with my temperamental twaddle....Fleeing Fox.

[Bryan]

Damn Fox...you have loads of verse store up in that head of yours don't you?

Very good though. get it all out.

[Lauren]

Glad you are back :)

[FleeingFox]

Damn Fox...you have loads of verse store up in that head of yours don't you?

Very good though. get it all out.

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

I've commited around 150 verse to written-word thus far, there are in excess of 1000's trapped inside of my head, it hurts to get them out.

I'll submit another thread in the near future, I'll look at posting some more of my verse, it'll have a link to this thread to enable anyone to readily access these files once this thread dissapears to another page. It takes a lot of mental energy from me to do these, I'm too messed up in the head right now.......

[Life is sweet]

Amazing. Good that you are able to get it out in a constructive way like this though. Good.

[FleeingFox]

Amazing. Good that you are able to get it out in a constructive way like this though. Good.

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

That's so kind of you to say, although, writing doesn't really 'get it out', memories remain, no matter what we do, don't you agree!

I write because, well, I don't know why really, the words flow from within me without pause, a constant stream of rambling words, my writing is shown on this site as it comes out, apart from spelling errors, there are no corrections made, nor any alterations, the words I put out are me, they are not deliberated, they are me.....

[empathic connection]

Keep doing what you do so well FF !